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Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2020 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

so happy to see you writting again

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2020 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

You sure build up the erotic tension! Excellent chapter and I look forward to the next one!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2020 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

And please don't lose your sense of humor!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2019 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

I really didn't see that one coming!a86;

Reviewer: memesRlife Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2019 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Which are you supposed to read fist LOTG 2016 or LOTG 2011?

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2019 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Wow! How did I not saw this story if it was first published in january?? Well, at least I have a lot of reading to do now. Liked the first chapter, specially the unique names. Also advanced some chapters and saw some cute romance parts. Loved it.

I am going to read somo more to make another comment... or comments, but it's almost certain I will love this one, so I am already giving it five stars to encourage you to continue the story  ;)



Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! Be sure to check my other stories, including the erotic novella ‘Zava&Mark-The reckoning’ soon to be concluded!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Glad to see you back, paisalandia! Well written chapter. Hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: 5952 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2019 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

This is getting really good, I hope you haven't given up on it!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Great story! Really like the gentle interaction between the two characters. I look forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2019 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Great story, great interactions, awesome work!

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2019 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Love the story are we going to get more of the other two, missing Melina and Zara...  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response: Hello BigDawg. Yes. Stay tuned for Zava's next chapter, coming soon!

Reviewer: chainorchid Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2019 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

I've been meaning to leave a review of this ever since the first chapter wen t up. I really like how the women are written to feel very foreign in language and culture while still relatably human.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2019 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Please more

Interesting story!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2019 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Interesting story!

Keep it up!

And thank you for writing!

Reviewer: Tiny Trees Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2019 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Spotted

Adoring this story so far. Can't wait to see where it will go from here. Keep up the good work.

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