Date: February 21 2021 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Woo! Another chapter! Willow is back and the poor girl toughend up! At least she's alive. As for Ryan, good on him for saying enough is enough and getting out of there, now he has new friends and some fast learning to do if he wants to stay alive. As for Emily and Mary, it felt good seeing them realize how careless and neglectful they've been, to the point they drove Ryan away even though they genuinely cared about him. It will be interesting to see them deal with these realizations, including Emily in regards to her students 'playing'.
Another little plot point I hope escelates is the fact that older people like Ryan can now shrink. There would be an interesting shift in this society if it turns out this dreaded shrinkism disease has mutated and can shrink adults now. Anyway, Keep up the good work!
Date: February 19 2021 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see you added more to the story, i can't wait to see what happens next as they try to get some supplies especially if it involves Ryan's mom and her carelessness for "bugs" :)
[Report This]Date: February 19 2021 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great seeing this story updated again.
Ryan seriously can't seem to catch a break.
I still feel like Emily needs to have some consequences with what happened with her students and not believing him, but I still hate Mary. (I mean she needs to be confronted with her action, the communicator, squashing the other tiny right in front of her son, she needs to go XD)
But I do hope Ryan gets home to Emily, he's not in a good situation here at all.
Date: November 05 2020 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok, so Emily and his mother need to be confronted with their shit.
I think Emily should definitely feel horrible for what she's done, but there could be some reconciliation.
But I still think Ryan's mother should fuck off XD (She's crazy!)
This chapter was definitely a whirlwind, so much interaction and situations Ryan was put through and I am excited for more.
But yeah, his mom and Emily need to be confronted with their actions and behavious.
Date: October 10 2020 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really loving your story here KickYou!
The conflicts feel natural, and the scenes keep me guessing. :)
Ryan is a bit annoying in that he has a neverending well of self-doubt but drama comes from the faults in a character, so I'm hooked! :)
Thank you for this!
Khal
Date: October 09 2020 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
First, you do a phenominal job of conveying the terror and despiration of shrinkies in an apathetic, dangerous world. Honestly I'm amazed these shrinkies have this much energy, or that they aren't extinct yet. The duality of Ryan's loved ones too, how much they (supposedly) care about him but so casually dismiss other shrinkies as bugs or snacks.
Second, Ryan's position is understandable but I'm also interally yelling at him for being such a coward when it comes to telling Emily and his mother what's going on and what they almost did. Just tell them man! Given his decision at the end, to simply leave, that came as a surprise. I'm interested to see what Ryan will do out in the world. Surely, he will encounter plenty other dangers but after surviving all that he has so far, he should know caution by now.
And props to Emily for still thinking of Ryan as a person. She may not be as considerate as she should be, but her heart's in the right place.
I'm also interested to see how Emily and Ryan's mother will react to his disappearance. Maybe Emily will find some dried up nacho cheese on her purse pocket and remember that shrinky she tried to gulp down claiming to be Ryan. I find a certain joy nowadays in seeing giants realize what they've done and being all guilty about it.
Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: October 09 2020 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really liked this chapter and where this is going now. Not sure if you could make him even shrink way more and I cant wait to find out what cruel ending this story might get too
Date: September 06 2020 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. Especialy this unaware part on chapter 7.
I hope this will have happy ending like Big proposal which was also a great story.
Date: August 17 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. Just wow. You have a talent fo casual cruelty, terror, and sexiness in your stories. Part of me wants to scream at Ryan to just tell his mom and Emily the truth but man the survival, the casual destructive power and cruelty of unaware giantesses. His mom is a force of nature and it's clear she's and oblivious air head who only cares about Ryan. Other shrinkies are just bugs and vermin to her. Emily is trying to be a supportive but she is totatly ignorant to just how bad shrinkies have it. She also seems like the type who only cares when it's someone she knows, otherwise...
Your stories get my heart racing and I keep coming back for more. Reading about cruel acts by giants nowadays makes me want to fight back but i'd be lying if i said I wasn't reading with rapt attention. This story, like many of yours, is great. Will poor Ryan finally tell the giant women how he really feels? I eagerly await what happens next.
Date: August 06 2020 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the battle between Ryan and Lindsey's foot in chapter 6, very well written story all around and looking forward to each addition as they come!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2020 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good as always 😊 I am not a fan of the entire mother and milf plot honestly, but thats just a personal thing.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2020 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
I would love to see more of the mom in the next chapter :)
Date: July 22 2020 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Personally, I LOVE the chapters with Ryan's mom as the main focus. I would love to see her in more chapters!
Also, I think it would be great if she could be confronted about what she's done. That, and to find out what kind of affect that her body has on Ryan.
Love the story, keep more chapters coming!!
[Report This]Date: July 21 2020 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm reading it and already LOVING it! I loved the natural way you described the vore scenes and the interactions are good to.
Date: July 21 2020 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think Ryan's mother needs to be confronted with what she's done
she's clearly not taking enough precautions and needs to be alerted to what she's done ( everything, including her killing the other tinies ) and how it's affecting Ryan ( plus would love to see her reaction to knowing how her nudity affected him, etc )
Date: June 12 2020 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is a GREAT story so far!
I personally would LOVE to see more interaction between Ryan and his mom! I would like to maybe see Ryan say something to his mom that hurts her feelings, or just talk about when he hurt her feelings before, and she would reveal how much it hurt her. This would lead to Ryan agreeing to spend more time with her, and he would be more accepting of what she wants to do with him, when she wants to do it.
This, then, would lead to Mary slowly but surely becoming the head of the household. Maybe Mary, Emily, and Ryan would be watching TV. Emily and Ryan are sitting together as a couple, but then Mary says "Do you think I could hold Ryan for a bit?" To which Ryan would feel like he has to agree, and he gets snatched up in her smothering hands. Maybe Mary would ask her "little man" to rub her feet for her, in front of Emily! And then Mary would absentmindedly begin to play with him: rolling him under and between her soles, squeezing him with her toes. And all the while she's saying totally embarrassing mom things, cooing and "aww"ing at her "baby".
Maybe she'd ask if Ryan can sleep in her room sometimes, and this would only increase the sexual tension of separation between Ryan and Emily as well as totally emasculate Ryan as his mother cuddles and snuggles him like he's a baby again while his beautiful, sexy girlfriend is in their bedroom by herself. Maybe Emily would start to work longer hours, making it so that Ryan sleeps with his mom more often!
I don't really want Emily to have any affair with Rick, but IF she did, that would then be the perfect opportunity for Mary to be like "Aww, don't worry, sweetheart! Mommy will take care of her little baby from now on!"
Sorry, I know that's a lot, but you did ask to see what kinds of things we wanted to see from Mary! In the end though, it's your story, I just hope you are inspired by at least some of my hypothetical paths the story could go down!
Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely as always.
Any chance of butt stuff in the future?
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Those narcs ratted on sweet innocent Linds, monsters.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice new read, didnt see any mistakes or such.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2020 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
loved the mom part. hope you come back to this story ,