[Report This]Date: May 24 2020 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
loved the mom part. hope you come back to this story ,
Date: April 22 2020 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
I've enjoyed the story so far and am glad to see it continue. I mainly into F/mf oral vore and wondered if there would be any more scenes of that? Scenes like small snacks where they are served with food is a my favorite. You write them in a way I really enjoy and it's the main appeal of the story along with the world building and how people seem to stop considering you as human or at least an equal when you shrink,
If you are open to suggestions I thought it might be cool if Ryan ever brought up that shrinkie Emily ate to her and ask if she saw him the same way or if she would ever do that to him in hopes of reassurance. I think it would be a reasonable fear for him to bring up. It would also be cool to see anything similar with Allison considering she seems to enjoy eating shrinkies a lot. It might also be interesting to haer some taunting to shrinkies since not many people have talked to them directly. I think it could be interesting if Ryans mom ended up catching shrinkies to eat and Ryan found out, but thats just my personal bias. Im looking forward to the confrontation between Ryan and his Mom about Steven.
Having said that do you have any estimate on the next installment?
Date: April 22 2020 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
wasnt a fan of the mother actually but thats everyones taste, I find mother plots just kinda too cliche and not a turn on for me. but the steve part was awesome.
Date: April 22 2020 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Personally I like the mother and would love to see more of her :)
[Report This]Date: April 22 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Amazing story and personally, inspiring. Seriously want to pick up the pen and start writing again after reading this. Keep up the good work!
Date: April 21 2020 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
The mom should definitely be told that was a person ( or did she know and was trying to keep Ryan 'safe' from other tinies?)
Either way there should be consequences
I'd vote to get rid of her, definitely
Date: April 21 2020 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I think this is my favorite chapter yet. I think definitely worth keeping the mom around for a little bit, but also want to see more interaction with the other three giantesses. Tess' threat was hopefuly forshadowig of what is to come... one way or another can't wait until she gets her hands (or feet) on him.
I was a little surprised how quickly he reached the final size, definitely a few more interactions could be done over the week he downsized, could see more of Emily changing how she treats him along the way.
Im also looking forward to she how Allison treats him... or if she convinces Emily to 'move on' from taking care of Ryan.
Can't wait, hope this story continues to be near the top of your queue! Final takeaway: More Tess the better!
[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Amazingly written, I loved the dream part but the entire Steven ending and mid part. Finally some action haha. Poor Steven. This is an amzing idea to meet shrinkies and maybe even some very tiny ones, like ants or bugs. I liked the part of Steven mention how his sisters boyfriend totally didnt like him, or the dog part. Totally looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm in this strange situation where I think that this story is impeccably written and that the world it's set in has a lot of possibilities, but that the violence and the callousness of some of the characters just isn't for me, despite my efforts to like it.
I'm still giving this story full marks though, since you deserve it and I'm sure other people that are into this stuff will love your writing.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the violence but I kind of wanted something on the side of like horrible and like cruel a world to help bring some of Ryan and other people's real personalities. I understand if it's not for you, but I'm happy you enjoyed it up till now.