[Report This]Date: June 19 2019 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Totally deserve a good rating because of how an incredbiel autor you are. The story has some parts I totally enjoy and love not sure where you will drive it to. But it was fantastic written so far, as usual all your stories.
Date: June 16 2019 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
chapt2 was even better now already. looking forward for next to come in the future and whats about to hapen with ryan. maybe even ad some random peoples perspetive ending realy small and kiled in a cruel way of some boys like this school part was realy hot. the burger part I didnt like the chew part would be way better if he swalowd the micro whole. how small can they also shrink? would lke to see them become really small to like bugs or ants not just toys.
Date: June 14 2019 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I totally forgot to add a review for the first chapter of this which made me super sad. This story was always on my list of stories I wanted to see continue, so I it makes me very happy to see it got a new update! Your writing keeps improving the longer you write and I love it!
As far as the story goes, amazing! The first chapter was enough to grab my attention but this one just adds on to it. The way you build up Ryan's history, his interactions with Jack, his concerns for Peter, his first time and meeting Emily, and even his pure indifference (to sastifcation) to someone going through what he might be soon going thorugh at Small Snacks, you're building an excellent character narrative. I'm not going to ask you do anything different because it might throw off the story just please keep updating this and I'll keep reading (even if I don't have a chance to review it).
[Report This]Date: June 14 2019 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Forgot to say but I also absolutely loved the school part with the bully Jack and Peter, and the burp part and how no one really cared about Peter... he was nver found haha. I didnt like that Jack shrunk though then, that totally took away the whole unfairness. I am not a fan of fair plots or fair judgement.
I loved though how Ryan never wanted to hurt any shrinkies and found it unfair, and then totally he still did it eventually, and then not even cared. That showe the entire cruel thing of this shrinkism socieity thing.
If there is anything I could wish for, I would love to see some teenage boy cruel parts like with the bully, maybe some ass, masturbating parts with tiny micros, feeding them to a bird or dog, stepping, maybe even Ryan later would end with his head inside a cruel boys asshole.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2019 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
That part with Tim was my favorite, so hot. Especially if you consider what will be around the corner for Ryan. Really enjoyable story.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2019 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very good and glad to see an update to this story!!