Man, I want a side story with an unaware Mr. Green. That juxtaposition of being so friendly and caring to Shrinkees, yet unaware of what he can do to them? Amazing. Similar to the one with Emily under the desk. That was so good. This chapter was great at this length, and gave me more to root for.

Wow that cliff hanger im so excited to see what happens to poor ryan, I think he is in trouble 

Got me good, fucker. :P

Just finished with the first 4 chapters - absolutely great story thus far. Wonderful pacing, with great backstory, character description and build up of suspense.

I'll continue reading, but I notice the story is not completed. Based on what I've read thus far, I think it would only be fitting if Allison was the one to finish poor Ryan off, perhaps in the following outline:

- Emily is once again lax while shopping at the mall. Ryan gets kidnapped by a person who sells him to 'It's a Small World'. A distraught Emily accompanies Allison to the store the next day, Allison convincing her to go with to try to cheer her up. While buying some toys there, Allison buys a set of 10 shrinkies, while Emily holds back. Allison is shocked to see one of the shrinkies is Ryan. On the way out of the store, she offers a shrinky to Emily, who, like Ryan in chapter 4, notices there are only 9 shrinkies in the bag (Ryan is secretly inserted). They go out to dinner, where Allison comes on to Emily (Allison is not happy with her boyfriend and Emily has just lost hers and the two have found each other attractive for a long time; Allison pushes Emily to go that next step). They go back to Allison's place, where, while performing oral sex on Emily, Allison vores Ryan. Emily is unaware the shrinky they've been playing with was Ryan.  Just a thought.

Omg so glad this is back I’ve been checking every Friday definitely my fav story on here

Urghh, Mary is such a bitch. 

She's part of the problem and doesn't even see it (and I still can't get over her crushing that other shrinkee). She also needs to stop perceiving Ryan as a child. 

I want Ryan and Emily to get back together, but obstacles (and Ryan's own decisions) seem to be keeping them apart.

Great work on this chapter, can't wait to read more. 

Happy to see the story is still going strong. I'm guessing Ryan will make his way back to Emily one way or another through this kid.

Aw man, is Ryan going to somehow find his way back only to see Emily with another shrinky she’s taken in? Not only making him feel inadequate, but also confused as his thoughts about her may have been wrong to begin with. 

No! Please let Willow's competent friends or even the useless Ryan rescue her. Even if it's after she gets taken away, abused, and traumatized, someone's gotta want to try and help her by hitching a ride to this next house. Don't kill off our best girl in this cruel world :(

Great chapter showing how people act towards shrinkies even if they are acquaintances. Emily acting surprised how people treat shrinkies when she does the same just not as much to Ryan.  Both Emily and Mary being indenial about their own attitudes and actions towards Ryan and shrinkies. Not paying attention to Ryan, watching their step, checking if its Ryan who they are about to squish or even bothering to wear the earpiece. Ryan not able to grasp the situation he is in by being a shrikie not understanding how the world truly sees shrinkies and not considering the dangers of his size even though he has had a few mishaps inside his own home.

Glad to see Willow has become such a strong person but letting Ryan get to her was not good. Now we will see the consequences of the group losing their leader.

Keep up the great work.