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Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2019 9:54 AM Title: Scott's Dilemma

I was hoping for an update soon, I hope you continue the story.

Reviewer: Randomrobot66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2018 2:59 PM Title: Scott's Dilemma

Great start to the story, do you plan to have any vore or mouth play related events happening? You can get creative because Abigail wears braces.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2018 3:56 AM Title: Scott's Dilemma

That was a wonderful story. Loved it.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2018 9:28 PM Title: Scott's Dilemma

Nice story.  A couple of questions though, as I'm sure you will address in your next chapter.

First, how small is he?  Hopefully a few inches tall, like between 3" to 6".  Often the tiny is so small in stories it limits their uses. 

Second, is he actually to be her pet from now on, no longer human?  That kindagoes back to question number one.  Does she plan on leashing him, in which case he'd have to be a relatively big tiny, like 6" to 16" or so.  If he's to be more bug sized, is he 1" or more or is he less?

Where ever you take this story, your writing style is fantastic.  Flawless grammar and quick moving story line.

Not to influence your story, but it would be interesting if Scott began seeing Abigail as more of either his Owner or God, perhaps both, along with realigning his self awareness as now being Abigail's property.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your interest! Scott is about an inch and a half tall, somewhere between 1" and 2".

Reviewer: JLZ Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2018 8:13 PM Title: Scott's Dilemma

Nice start, hopefully Scott feels less pathetic and more happy in his role as pet.  Of course this is depending on what Abigail's personality develops to.  For clarity, was the syringe going to shrink him farther than an inch or two to begin with?



Author's Response:

Yes, it would have. I suppose I should have clarified that he didn't inject the entire dose. I'll fix that to avoid any future confusion by that, thank you!

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