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Reviewer: ThrowaYay Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 20 2018 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 Assistant Position

Good start.

Reviewer: spaceranger123 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2018 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 Assistant Position

way too much white space. at this rate you'll take up the entire website server's storage with his incessant padding.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2018 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 Assistant Position

Not a fan of sc*t, but I like the general attitude and how you're writing this.

My only criticism/disagreement atm is that she probably should have given him a chance to be her assistant, even if set up so he would lose or something, but I'll trust your choice fits with her world view.

Reviewer: bluefire121 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 Assistant Position

Looks very good. Hope to see more soon

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