Reviewer: DarkStarGoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I saw no reviews for this so I just wanted to say it seems like a neat idea so far and I like the not exactly cruel but humiliating if slightly gentle tone the domination has to it.  However I recommend breaking up the giant paragraphs it would make the story easier to read.  I look forward to seeing where this is going.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment =) Glad you liked it. I did some formatting in my text editor and reuploaded it. I hope it got a bit easier to read