[Report This]Date: April 12 2021 10:47 AM Title: A City in the Woods
I am hoping that this story continues, and that it doesn't stray to far from the "Gentle" category. I was hoping to see some more gentle interactions between Grace and the tinies. I hope it is playful and not to domineering in future chapters. (If it does continue, I mean this is a story from 4 years ago)
[Report This]Date: November 21 2018 7:52 PM Title: A City in the Woods
Make Grace more power and Dominate.
More gentle interactions with Grace with the Tinies and Beth with Tinies
Have a mutually benefically alliance beteewn Grace and 'New York"!
Great story, would prefer naughty over mean in displining the Tinies, and even then less or more.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2018 5:59 PM Title: A City in the Woods
Have to agree with the other reviewers Grace has control. She will discover that the folks from that part of New York have advances, perhaps those that help her and her magic. If she can read minds and 'suggest' she has no real need to be cruel or overbearing in her treatment. In fact I agree with Ugly she gets a lot more milage from being 'nice, gentle, and compassionate' there are likely half to three-quaters of the inhabinants who have little to offer her. If she is smart she can say she's able to send such and such number home every week. She builds good will and by hinting if they help her she maybe able to send more, with her ablities she will get the best of those she needs. Also she's smart, she knows if she rewards them with better food, devices and other things they will work even better for her. This while she prefects her spells, and maybe snags another city by 'acident' being 'sorry and remorseful' Grace works with them as she does with New york, Maybe Grace was the source of the orginal magical storm? Not saying Grace shouldn't be nasty if she has to be, but even an evil mastermind wants a calm homefront, Grace is self-intrested from my read and if she can get better results with a karrot and stick rather then stick I think she would go for it.
Beth, even if Grace is gentle, good and kind (which she maybe for her own means!) theres going to be tension beteewn them cause Beth is figuring out Grace is selfish and self-intrested, if she does those things it because she gains from them, I am guessing them will fight, Beth to protect and maybe move her friend to a more chartible mindsite, Grace to gain more power, she doesn't have to be nasty to do it either her abilities, size and her shrunken pool of labor can allow her to make her goals into the tinies goals with a win-win for both sides (larger win for Grace).
Great chapter, more gentle interactions please!!!
Date: November 21 2018 3:47 PM Title: Desperation
I low key was hoping that Grace would somehow shrink the city, and it happened! I like where this is heading, how she hastaken controlofthes situation and everything...
Looking forward to what she willdonext!
AlsoI'Imnot having a seizure, I swear.SwiftKey just sucks
Date: November 21 2018 6:12 AM Title: Desperation
What an awesome chapter. Grace has more power than I thought. She can control minds and she can reduce the entire city to fit in the palm of her hand. How powerful and majestic. Will Grace use tweezers to explore the little people?
[Report This]Date: November 21 2018 4:44 AM Title: A City in the Woods
Good story so far, seems to be drifting rather quickly from Gentle though...
Grace just shrinking them, Grace being a 'bit''power-hungry, Grace pulling mind control games.
We have more then enough squash, vore and violance on this site, maybe Grace's character though self-intrested, can reach the enlighted verision, once she sees the buildings she at least her own self is impressed at what the world of these 250 can do. On more study the devices and tech open more possiblities for her magic and her to 'aid' other in devolping more tech. She figures out a way to get the more "menail' workers back (since they add nothing to her powers and killing them would be pointless, saving them though would demonstrate good intent and get even better results, ect) Basically Grace understands slaves do exactly what they are told, those with love ones on the line will focus only on that while 'reasonably free' poeple will devolp things that will blow even her mind. So Grace in her own intrest is kind, gentle and nice. When she threatens things it's pleasures or freedoms not lives and she uses what they give her to enhance her power yes but she also rewards them with something other you get to live. Grace once she understands tries to maintain an air of bevelonce about her, does in her manner care for them (and billions more as she gains more and more power from them and their devices) and rewards them. She does also maintain just the hint of fear and terror to 'motative' them as well (can't be all postive), but in the end treats them as poeple.
Now for power, with her mage ablities and her size once the portal to their would is open she knows she could likely conquer them, but as with Sabina she works to stubly control the world, over time advancing thier tech and slowly shrinking earth until she can secure it in her lab. As she gains control she like the 250 stays basically kind, good and gentle but also allows herself to be seen and worshiped as a goddess. One that rewards good, peaceful citizens who devolp or make things that increase her power, or advance her subjects tech (cause one tech might not help her but she is wise enough to know follow-ons can and she gets credit for being a goddess who cares for her subjects). As her power continues to grow she brings in more and more worlds attempting a postive feed-back in which a world devolps something she passes it on to others as they grow ecomonically, life style and health Grace becomes increasingly immortal, powerful and able to help them devolp the next item.
The conflict is Beth would like see this as soft slavery and having vowed to defend those first ones would extend that oath to all the others.
Good story so far, please keep it gentle, more then enough vore, squish and violance already.
Author's Response:
thank you for taking the time to write so much! the story right now is kind of at the end of Act I, and I have an outline of how I want it to go, but I'm seeing some wonderful ideas in the reviews (this and others) that I will be sure to consider!
Date: November 21 2018 12:13 AM Title: Grace
Love the idea of a tiny diplomat riding in her ear. I'm anxious to see if Grace can indeed be trusted as well as how the miniature folk will react to a woman who is tall even amongst the giants.
Date: November 20 2018 5:09 AM Title: A City in the Woods
Great story!
I'm eager to know what Grace will do to the little people.
Especially because she's a mage.
Date: November 19 2018 4:45 AM Title: Grace
I'm enjoying the story. Will Grace capture some of the little people to use as pets?
Date: November 17 2018 12:37 AM Title: A City in the Woods
Interesting concept. I too am curious what the cause of that storm could be and where it took them. Love the fantasy vibe of Beth's world and am anxious to learn more. Personally, I would not object if the story was completely gentle but I might be in the minority on that.
Minor quibble - She said she's never heard of New York but I don't think the little guy actually mentioned New York. Other than that, good start.
Author's Response:
Yup, editing mistake. I went back and forth on whether or not I wanted to name the city or just leave it vague, but yeah I just reread that part and noticed it doesn't completely make sense. Will edit it when I post the next chapter!