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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2018 11:26 AM Title: Lucina - Future Witness

Cool story, looking forward to more!

As for requests, F/f with girls like Tharja, Nowi, Severa, Tiki, and Nino would be nice for me. As for kinks, butts, armpits or some other sweaty/smelly scenarios would be cool.

Reviewer: Reheart Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2018 1:43 PM Title: Lucina - Future Witness

Good story! Seeing some Camilla tit and ass stuff could be cool.

Reviewer: NotOnTime Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2018 6:27 PM Title: Lucina - Future Witness

Oh I forgot, great name for the story. I love that song.

Reviewer: NotOnTime Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2018 6:27 PM Title: Lucina - Future Witness

For a first story you did a great job! The dialogue felt close to the games, like how Lucina exclaims "Oh Gods". I'm looking forward to seeing more, especially if it involves farts and unaware stuff. If I could request a character Lyn or Tharja would be great.

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2018 4:49 PM Title: Lucina - Future Witness

Great job with the first chapter!

The character interactions were solid and it was nicely detailed. The chapter also has a nice mix of unaware and aware action, which is always a nice feature. It's also got a lot of potential, since you can choose to write about whichever Fire Emblem characters you want, due to the set-up.

Also, Twilight of the Gods is a great theme, so that was a perfect choice for a title.

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