Amazing story! There was so much detail and action throughout the entire chapter.

What appealed to me the most was how the story got better as it went on. At first, it seemed like your average unaware story, but then you had David go through a bunch of Kelly’s body parts and included a little bit of everything.

I loved how you transitioned from one body part to another. The floor to her toes, then the couch to her butt, then the toilet to her panties, and finally the bed to her ear. Amazing!

I bet it felt good to write this chapter. Everything flowed very well as if you wrote this all in one go, it was smooth.

I did feel as if 1/4 of an inch may be too small. That’s like the size of a housefly. But then again, it’s mostly unaware, so the size choice is reasonable. He has to be small enough where she won’t notice him.

Amazing one-off story Shrinker82! You should make more like this. I enjoyed reading this fresh adventure and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! In actuality, I’ve been working on this story little by little, off and on for several years, back when I just wanted a little story of my own to read/fantasize about now and again. It was also long before I started to publish anything, so when I decided to post it, I had to do a lot of editing and polishing to make sure everything flowed smoothly. With this story, I wanted to incorporate everything I love about the unaware giantess scenario, and tried to cover as much as I could. I’ve said before that I prefer some degree of realism to my stories, so everything was scrutinized: I’ve measure and contemplated several sizes, and 1/4 inch is just about the height for someone to be small enough to go unnoticed, like being stuck between someone’s toes, yet still be large enough to interact with the environment, aka the giantess. I also tried to make the characters believable, especially Kelly as a realistic giantess, not just some big-breasted, blond-haired, skinny model that no normal person would ever have a chance in hell of dating. This is what I’ve been working on the past week or so, and I wanted to get it posted. I have several more ideas for short, single chapter stories, which I visit off and on between the chapters of my longer ones (that’s why the next installment of Babysitter Trouble has been delayed). Thanks for reading and for the awesome review! As I finish other stories, I’ll get them posted.