Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2019 5:37 AM Title: An Antibiotic Secret

A bit late to the party, but let me start off by saying you have a very nice story going here.  I really appreciate the pace your taking the story at and I hope that continues when the real action starts.  Too many slow shrink tales skip ahead too fast.  I like the relationship he has with Gwen, it should prove interesting once he is smaller than her.  I hope some of those senarios that Gwen hinted too become a reality.  I personally am waiting for the 2-3in range.  I really like your writing, it's easy to read and follow the story.  I like the characters you've created, they are really believable.  You have another dedicated follower to your take here, and I am looking forward to the next installments. 

Author's Response:

Well, thank you very much for the kind review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story, as well as the characters that I've worked hard to create, and don't worry the shrinking won't be anything too rappid. I hope to have the new chapter up soon, but I'm not making any promises on when.