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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2019 11:53 PM Title: The Shrinking Feeling

Great story! I hope there are still more chapters to come! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I just updated it, hope you enjoy the new chapter. ^_^

Reviewer: rygar300 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2018 12:25 PM Title: The Shrinking Feeling

Great new chapter. I love all the teasing/foreshadowing. Cant wait for that dollhouse to become a reality 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked what had been writen up to that point and I hope you like the latest edition.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2018 4:48 AM Title: The Shrinking Feeling

I think that a natural progression would be to go to a more advanced doctor if he goes to a doctor at all. A female doctor is much more exciting. You can feel very small in her hands as she examines you. Just an opinion of what your readers might enjoy if he goes to the doctor again.

Author's Response: In order, there isn’t any “advanced” doctor to give him treatment, remember the research was done for illegal bioeeapons. As for “what my readers might enjoy”, don’t you mean what you might enjoy? ;) Anyway, the story is still young and I’m still trying to feel things out myself as with most things in life the story is all about the journy not the destinatiom. He’s still got a longbway to go before he is able to fit in anyone’s hands.

Reviewer: Lil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2018 4:34 PM Title: The Shrinking Feeling

Really good story ! I think u gonna write other chapter ! :) 

Love this continue <3 



Author's Response:

Hahaha, yes I'm going to write a new chapter. And it will continue.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2018 4:29 AM Title: The Shrinking Feeling

I like that you are taking things slowly. Gwen wearing wedges is cute. I wonder if he will literally look directly at the side of her wedges? Will his next doctor be a female doctor? A doctor more advanced in knowledge about his shrinking? I like the studying of the blood cells. Very scientific.
Great story,
Diesel

Author's Response:

I don't want to give anything in the future away, as for the doctor it's going to pretty much be the male for the duration.

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