Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2018 1:27 AM Title: Exercising Openness

Nice chapter. I liked the kneeling in the tub to see what it was like to be smaller. So his dad also shrunk. I assume he will make an appearance? Does he live in a dollhouse? Will he eventually go to a female doctor? I like the slow shrinking. I also much prefer the real life aggrevations than any smutty stuff. Enjoying your story.

Author's Response: No, dad wasn’t shrunk, the VitaCorp people are the first known cases of shrinking. Dad is, gone, thought that I wrote that in the first chapter that his passing is why Dave studied vaccinations.