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Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2018 6:04 PM Title: Ch 9: Showering with Rin...? (Rin Part 3)

Oops. I forgot to leave a review for this chapter! I really enjoyed this one, gave me Nesi shower fun time vibes! Except unaware, of course. I love Rin's character, so this was amazing. Especially the bit near the end where Shirou just got to admire Rin's form, being an inadvertent voyeur . I look forward to the bath and the fun times in there.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I wanted to make the shower interaction unaware, because I realized that Rin wouldn't actively have Shirou join him at this stage. I kind of rushed it with the chapter leading up to it, hence my minor rewrite before I released Chapter 9. Glad you liked the chapter and that it reminded you of the Nesi stuff, which was also pretty fun to write.

I hope you like the next chapter. (which is out by the time of this response)

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