Date: October 16 2018 3:11 AM Title: Ch 4: Planning The Next Move...
Still absolutely loving this story!! Saber is fantastic and I hope that somewhere along the story, Saber given her pension for hunger ends up putting Shirou in her mouth an sucking on him at some point only for the dominant effect to wear off and her to be like I AM SO SORRY....and yet he tasted great...so she kinda wants to put him back in.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you're still enjoying the story.
For your suggestion, I can't see that happening exactly how you describe, since Saber wouldn't see the super tiny Shirou as a source of food. BUT I can see something where Saber does that as a form of punishment, during a moment when that dominant side takes effect, before reacting just as you describe when it wears off. It could definitely be fun.
Take care dude!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2018 11:45 PM Title: Ch 4: Planning The Next Move...
Good chapter, I liked the foot related stuff. Interesting to see Saber being affected somehow to being somewhat more dominant towards Shiro. Eager to see how things will play out with Rin and to see some foot related stuff with her too
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I wanted to have an excuse to make Saber a bit more dominant, at least for occasional moments. And of course Saber would normally treat a tiny Shirou with the utmost care and affection, so this keeps things interesting.
And once Rin makes her appearance, there will definitely be foot stuff with her. That should be pretty fun to write.
Take care!