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Reviewer: bubsboy81 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2019 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Biology Class

Fantastic chapter! I'm always fan of unaware encounters and this was well written! Excited to see where the story takes Alex, seems like she might get a more in-depth tour of her devourer?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Starting the Final Year

Tremendous!

 

Can't wait for more Kels.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2018 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 2 - First Day of Class

Nice to see this story back. Alex has made an enemy already I see. This should be interesting. I'm kind of surprised that Lily hasn't been assigned as Alex's guardian for every class. Seems like quite a risk (though it does move the plot along).



Author's Response:

*ignore that I'm ten months late responding pls*

The school system sucks, and hasn't yet adapted to suit its vertically challenged students. Thankfully, since most tinies are much more durable, there hasn't been a major accident yet, which is probably what the schools need to prompt an actual change. Maybe Alex will be that tinyt who is unfortunate enough to make the change happen.

...that's my flimsy plot armor. :P

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2018 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Starting the Final Year

Any chance of finishing Sara’s Misfortune? One of my favorite stories on this site! I left an idea
On a new review there for you!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Starting the Final Year

Nice beginning. I love these kinds of scenarios so I will be keeping an eye on this one.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Starting the Final Year

Glad you're writing again, seems like it'll be a good story. 

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