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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2018 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Emily's Place

This is a great series overall, and it's cool that you're writing a sequel.

For this chapter specifically, I like how you introduced the new characters. And you do a great job at weaving together the action and the plot progression.

One thing that wasn't super clear to me was whoever was first in their truth or dare game. I think that it was Emily but I wasn't entirely sure. The others were clear though, so I have a good idea based on who was left.

But I'm looking forward to what happens next. Nice job and keep up the good work!

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