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Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2021 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Really love this story! Please continue! Its been so long!

Reviewer: psychotropic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2019 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 - No Escape

I love this story. I'd like to see where it goes.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2018 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

I continue to really like the story, but I feel you are beginning to blaze through characters without any meaningful interaction with any single one of them. What made part 1 of USSPS compelling was the character development. It might help to slow the pace a bit unless this is part of a broader story arc I can't yet see. Would also love to see interaction including but moving beyond nails to footplay and exploration.  Would also love to see gts growth down the line as Anna, Elana, or Anna's little sister would have a lot of fun with it. Still, great work and looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the advice. Kinda hit a wall here. Taking some time to think of what's next.

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2018 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Emily's Place

This is a great series overall, and it's cool that you're writing a sequel.

For this chapter specifically, I like how you introduced the new characters. And you do a great job at weaving together the action and the plot progression.

One thing that wasn't super clear to me was whoever was first in their truth or dare game. I think that it was Emily but I wasn't entirely sure. The others were clear though, so I have a good idea based on who was left.

But I'm looking forward to what happens next. Nice job and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Starlord73 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Hope for a new chapter soon really love this story

Reviewer: sp180 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Hey jnbt,

I like the world you've built. I see a lot of potential. I think one aspect that could use more emphasis would be more physical interaction, such as body/parts exploration.

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Good point. Will keep that in mind.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2018 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Elana Plays with Us

Ooh good chapter. I really want to see what happens next, how upset she is. 

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Back to Anna

By any chance, can you have Elana swallow the pill?  I know that you haven't done stuff like that in the past, but i just feel that would be a really neat plot twist.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2018 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Elana's Apartment

Elana looks like she would make a great giantess if her friend at USSPS could ever give her a growth pill...she would have the time of her life.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Anna and Friends

Nice chapter. I wonder if their was a mix up, and that pill lasts longer than 24 hours, maybe a month, or at least a week?

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Nice to see you continuing your USSPS story, it's definitely taking an interesting and unexpected turn. I would so love to read about Grace or someone like her hosting a party just like the one she suggested in the previous installment, slowly making the male guests smaller and smaller and smaller and smaller throughout the night as they try to resist the girls' humiliations as midgets, mice and ultimately microbes. Doesn't look like anything of the sort will happen on this occasion, but maybe keep it on the backburner?



Author's Response:

Nice. I had an old story idea I was going to put in my "Scenarios" stories, but I stopped bc no one seemed that interested in the idea of random short stories. In the story, a group of college kids meet in a dorm room, guys and girls. They drink and play a board game where everyone starts off one foot tall. If you get a question right, you double in size; if you get a question wrong, you shrink by half. Of course, the girls end up 6 feet, 3 feet, a few are shrunk tiny too. The guys are bad at the game, and you can guess the rest, especially after they drink a lot. On the backburner, definitely.

Reviewer: 1mmtall Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Back Home

Amazing as always, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Do it! One little shrunken play time is no reason to break up!

I'm looking forward to what is coming, and thank you for writing!

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

Excited for the premise of this story would to see u bring back anna’s sister friend the one the french pedicure. Great to see this story again.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2018 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

I'm so excited you decided to continue this story. It's a great concept and one of my favorites on here! Hopefully there's a lot of footplay and the return of the French pedicure girl. Maybe even some growth with the USSPS ray? Great story and thanks again!

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