[Report This]Date: September 17 2018 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved The Climber, that was one of the first and best GTS stories I ever read back in the early days. I'd love to see more variations in size like there were in the original. Heck if I was a client, I'd be complaining that the whole shrinking process goes far too fast and deprives me of a chance to enjoy and interact with the world growing around me. I think it would be great to see Pete reduced to just half his size for a change, knowing he's now at Jill or Rachel's total mercy and it's only the beginning of the adventure as he goes to town on their feet.
Any chance this company might eventually consider allowing multiple clients sharing a room, live GTS exploration or group tours? I was thinking what it would be like for example if Jill took a bribe to let several guys shrink down together on her flip flops, only for the size ray to malfunction and leave them microscopic. Then she'd need to send Pete on a mission to retrieve them, shrink him down in several stages as she teases him at her feet, while Rachel secretly monitors the whole thing...
Author's Response: This is an exciting review. You might have as much fun reading the story as I have writing it. There will definitely be multiple size roles. That was always my plan. Each of my stories has different "mechanics" for the size role. In this story, there are projectors that alter size, as opposed to people being born big or permanently reduced in size. This story offers me a lot more freedom to play around with different sizes. I don't want to say too much at this point. There's no point in spoiling future chapters. If you read all three stories, you will see the differences between them. I'm not trying to write the same story three times, but yes, they all have lots of foot stuff! :D
[Report This]Date: September 14 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love your writing and stories. More feet please!!
Author's Response: More?! Okay... I guess I need to start that fourth story I've been thinking about. Not enough feet is the only unacceptable complaint, at least to me!
Date: September 12 2018 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is fantastic! You're doing a great job with these.
Author's Response: I do the best I can. I never felt like my writing was all that spectacular, but I do believe my stories offer a certain authenticity.
Date: September 11 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for continuing/re-posting. After you posted the first chapter I too kept on looking for the story that it reminded me of, seemed to be nearly identical. Turns out its the same one - but it was a favorite originally, so I hope that you continue it further than before. I really look forward to it. Awesome story and will certainly only get better. Hopefully more interaction with Jill, as well as Rachel of course.
Author's Response: Aye, it will be continued. I took it down a while back, because I honestly thought I would never continue it. I've since changed my mind. I really do enjoy the premise for this story.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2018 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good setup, interested to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review! I have to apologize, my update is late. Things came up as they often do, but I will post the new chapter tonight, like for realsies this time.
[Report This]Date: September 07 2018 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start!
Author's Response: Be sure to read The Climber by Ann too! It's such a great little story.