[Report This]Date: September 10 2018 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Maddie seems quite smart. She could easily break into his appartment and she also seems a good video editor and gamer. She outmatches the protagonist in simply every way.
Also, such a sweet thing to do, edit the video and upload it to his youtube channel. She helps him to get views. I don't understand why the protagonist hasn't asked her out yet.
Also, this review section is nearly becoming my personal echo box. Maybe you should start do a callout for reviews in the chapter itself. This helps push lazy people (like me) over the edge to write a review.
Thank you for writing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Eh, I really do like it when people review, but at the same time I'm not reviewing anyone else's stuff either. If people feel moved enough, they will say something. As long as the reads keep going up, it's all good.