[Report This]Date: October 07 2018 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is my favorite of yours. I sure hope you continue it!
Date: September 07 2018 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I actually wanted to wait untill the next chapter to respond, but let's do it now while I still remember what I wanted to say.
Bulldozer, lol. Maddy is a bit of a lousy bulldozer, the building is still standing. I really hope she becomes more of a bulldozer in the next chapter.
Also, should I imagine ASMR Maddy?
I'm really looking forward to a next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2018 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
You know that asmr is about being relaxed, quiet and comfortable right? It seems Maddy has more in common with Godzilla than asmr. She should chill out. If she continues like this she'll crush the poor protagonist before she gets her problems fixed.
Also, good to see that you are writing again, thanks!
Author's Response:
Yeah I know. Lol. I liked the idea of her comforting and putting people to sleep at night, then shutting off the camera and being a bulldozer in the real world. Also thank you. We'll see how long I stay motivated.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2018 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Could use a bit of proof-reading, but I really like the idea, and I'm eager to see you develop it further.