Reviews For Bully for You
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 2:05 AM Title: Bully for You

All in all I enjoyed it a lot.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I enjoyed writing it too.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 12:32 AM Title: Bully for You

I think Amelia is in love with our main character, that's why she gives him so much attention and ultimately decided she cannot live away from him and decides to swallow.

I also think our main character is in love with Amelia, he is simply mesmerized by her. When Amelia clearly gave him the chance to walk away, he stayed instead of running for the hills.

I must say that I liked the sort of mysterious part where the protagonist shrunk but Amelia didn't directly acknowledge it but let it  fully sink in.

Thank you for writing! I enjoyed this story!



Author's Response:

There's a thin line between love and hate, and if thinking they still love each other enhances the story for you I won't try to push a different narrative :)

 

I find it's a lot more fun to have people treat him like he's tiny instead of talk about him getting smaller.  Don't forget the other two girls he ran into who also didn't care, or everyone in the hall who ignored him.

 

Thanks for reading!  I really enjoyed writing it too, so I'm glad other people like it.

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