Date: September 16 2018 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Your story has fantastic descriptions i love it! If possible, one of my favorite scenarios is if he goes up her nose unaware. I saw your nose tag, so i figured this was a possibility. Great job so far!
Author's Response:
I'd love to write about this scenario and i probably will :) In the next chapter i will leave some poll options for people to vote so i have an idea of what people like.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2018 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
love your story. dont know if you're into this, but id love to see a scenario where hes less than an inch tall and he gets trapped under her asshole as shes masturbating and she farts on him and hes helplessly aroused.
Date: September 15 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Sorry typo.. duster was suppose to be sister
Date: September 15 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
Love the first chapter with interaction of duster. Hoping for vore or insertion
Author's Response:
Thank you, i like your suggestions aswell. let me know in more detail if theres anything youd like to see in the story. take care.
Date: September 15 2018 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
Not bad at all!
I hope that Jeremy's mother while asleep mistakes his body for her hot water bottle. I also hope that she has gorgeous feet. You've sort of hinted at something, with all of the foot care products in her room. If so, who knows why she doesn't show them off and keeps them always in shoes except when sleeping. Hmm. I also hope the oil scene is repeated, the poor boy ejaculating several more times to increase his amount of shrinkage.
I'm enjoying it and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
haha nice one. Yes the hot water bottle was a big hint! i'll write it up soon.
Date: September 14 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination
Woah... I am just speechless right now!
First I got to say I love how you added extra details and extended the first chapter, it definitely changed the setting/tone of the story. Don't get me wrong, I thought the original one was pretty good but you took it to a whole other level and it shows that you've put in a lot of work to setting up the whole story and the interactions with Jeremy and his family.
This second chapter just continues the awesome flow from the previous one that I got so immerse in it that next thing I know the chapter is over. Simply amazing!
Love the whole scene between the mother and Jeremy and how she is completely obviously of what she is actually doing to him.
Really excited to see where this goes from here. Keep up the amazing writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you! hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: September 05 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Great work!
+) Have you ever think about in-shoe story?
Author's Response:
Yes, i have. I like the situation of being stuck inside a giantess' shoe. Might be fun to write about.
Date: August 29 2018 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Hey! Definitely love the direction of where the story is going so far! You got a pretty interesting idea going on with not being able to move. Definitely can see a situation where the mother accidentally sits on him but mistakes him for a pillow and maybe if he gets smaller as a toy by her or other family/friends!
I definitely enjoy unaware situations where the character gets sat on or mistaken for something else.
Can't wait for the second chapter!! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response:
yeah thanks for the review and the ideas, i will definitely use them! And im the same, i prefer unaware situations where the character is mistaken for something else so i'm all for writing that. I have a couple of mistaken objects in mind already but i'm keen to hear more from reviewers.
Date: August 26 2018 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Nice story. My top three favorite, are when a tiny gets swallowed whole by an unaware giantess, and lives while coming out the other end, when a tiny male gets trapped in an unaware females womb, and changes into the females daughter through unbirth, and when a tiny gets caught in a vagina during sex, and lives through it.
Author's Response:
Thanks glad you enjoyed! I like those aswell!
Date: August 26 2018 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
I like the concept you have here. Not sure how I feel about the whole "not being able to move" thing, that tells me that a lot will happen and that Jeremy is in for a wild ride.