[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
nice set up chapter. Love to see where it goes with future interaction with Misaki, and have it come out that she knowingly put her feet on Jeremy's face when he rolled over in bed (secret dominant side).
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
You did a great job with the chapter!
I think introducing new characters is a good way to change up the pace of a story. And you integrated her into the story so that it all felt natural. The flashback was also nicely done.
I'd personally like to see more interactions with Misaki in the future.
Keep up the good work and great job on the story overall!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2018 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
Defiently wanting more of of Misaki
Author's Response:
cool thanks for reviewing!! check out the next part in 2 weeks
Date: November 13 2018 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
I'm digging it. Sure, I like Misaki, the more the merrier. Unaware generally frustrates me a bit, but I can tell you're more than willing to put your main character into some interesting and difficult to "mentally storyboard" situations. Hope the vacation is nice.
Author's Response:
I see what you mean. Luckily there is something for people who prefer aware GTS right around the corner. If there's parts of it in particular that you like feel free to request those.
Date: November 13 2018 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
Nice chapter. I liked Misaki. Is it bad that I hope that Jeremy, ends up swallowed, but lives. Especially if it is Misaki that does it, (possible if her and Felecity share the water bottle before Misaki leaves) I know the warning says mouth play, not vore, which means it probably won't, but I still like Vore more then mouth play. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
To be honest the tags don't really mean anything i just had to put some down at the start XD. I'm trying to cover a lot of GTS aspects eventually so i hope you hang around :D
Date: November 13 2018 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6 - That One Night
Great chapter! I like Misaki as there is opportunity for either Jeremy to be a dominant tiny or for Misaki to finally take control given her naturally passive/submissive nature. I would, however, still love to see Jeremy explore his sister's soles. Perhaps they could recreate the bed scene at his new size? Perhaps he could even be smaller than now?
Author's Response:
Should be something youd like in the chapter after the next! thanks for reviewing as usual.