[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Oh shit... Poor Jeremy... O_O lmao
Date: November 03 2018 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Still got me on the edge of my seat for the next chapter my man, keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: October 17 2018 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Very nice story! I'm really looking forward to seeing in which kind of situations the main character will get into.
As for suggestions, I already love some of the ones posted like tissue, nose, ear, being kept in a dollhouse, etc. Though for the most part, I would be happy to see butt content and lots of Eleanor. As for a new suggestion, something like being in a towel would be nice, or any other way to get him too close into some sweaty armpits.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions, There will be some sweaty armpits very soon!!
Also to anyone reading these reviews who is not a new reader, there is now a photo on chapter 2 or 3, cant remember!! :DD
[Report This]Date: October 17 2018 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Well now that’s an interesting twist. Id love to see it somehow where Jeremy gets his head stuck in the shaker, and his mom mistakes his head for the straw.
Author's Response:
I like that idea!!! Hopefully i'll have the chapter out tomorrow
Date: October 15 2018 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Nice chapter. I'm not sure what a shake, mixing ball is, but I hope that somehow, the mom ends up swallowing the son, yet he survives.
Author's Response:
Yeah i had a bit of difficulty describing it! I attached an image to make it clearer.
Date: October 15 2018 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts
Very excited for the next chapter. I've been waiting for Eleanor to get her opportunity . Hopefully he gets much smaller while they're together.
Author's Response:
Yes the next chapter is going to be really special i hope! As for eleanor some PG13 suggestions would be good.