[Report This]Date: February 11 2024 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Love this part, always been re-reading this from time to time because of how amazing it is! This will always be one of my favorite, if not, all time favorite story and part!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Holy fuck... O_O
Date: October 05 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Just brainstorming: edit it so that you include a bit about a slightly stretchable property of his flesh due to his sickness. Then edit the throat scene to make it more visceral and invasive. Perhaps also add an edit about him needing deep tissue massages occasionally to counteract his illness. That could be played out as torture with Felicity's smiling encouragement versus body crushing massage in her hands/whatever. Both additions allow more complex scenarios he can realistically survive. Mom meditating w/ him at her folded feet. Later and smaller, she lets him sleep on her pillow and her face rolls over onto him, plastering him to her. Stuck in a hairbrush. Trapped/plastered behind knee while she sleeps. Sister trusses him up (very tiny) and ties him to mom's trinket anklet. Ear cleaner. Taped at toe section of shoe. Hid in jewelry box. Kept in dollhouse/playset. Human toering. Booger. Chewing gum. Cake decoration. Naked yoga? Eek. Much darker things too but I've said enough.
Author's Response:
We have some very similar ideas! There are a few of those things that you can expect to see very soon. I had planned to include more visceral and invasive chapters involding various body parts not often written about so that edit would really help and set the foundations for a lot of great stuff, it's what i needed to hear. I kinda want to talk about my ideas and yours but in the end its probably better if we keep it spoiler free here. Keep checking back in though, your comments are always great. thanks!
Date: October 02 2018 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
So damn good! That she was shoving her toes into his mouth surprised me in the best possible way.
I love unaware so very much and this style, where they're mistaking the shrunken person for something else, is a particular favourite.
If you ever consider throwing some butt stuff in there, that's be amazing, but some unaware mouth stuff, which I think you've got in the works, would also be a great read.
Author's Response:
thank you! this is my favourite style of GTS story. I haven't set any limits on the story (although the story tagline kinda makes it sound like there are - gotta change that). I thought of a few ideas for butt stuff just now and i'm keen to hear your ideas!
[Report This]Date: October 02 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Turning her son into a hot water bottle and being unaware at the whole process and even asleep still doing it.
Young Master you really know how to push my buttons, is this really your first story here because this is beyond my expectations and the use of words to immerse oneself in story and changing perspectives... we have something big in here. Do not drop, do not stop for 2 years like usually happens in many good stories.
Be the change. Become what you are meant to be!
FULLFILL THIS EPIC STORY TO ITS COMPLETED SELF!
Author's Response:
Haha thats awesome. I'm glad you're enjoying the writing. I will continue this fun project :D
Date: October 02 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
I wouldnt mind seeing some in shoe stuff. Maybe have him worn to her place of work in some flats or heels. Also maybe her kicking him off of the bed and getting unawarely stepped on then stuck to her foot while she walks around the house.
Author's Response:
There's something in the works for in-shoe lovers! Hopefully after a couple chapters it will be the right time to include it.
Date: October 02 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Loving this story daft punk keep up the great work , would you be able to include a scene where Jeremy is unawarely crawling across a piece of tissue which Eleanor (or Felicity) unawarely uses and possible include one of them pissing on Jeremy unawarely .
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! Do you mean both kinds of tissue like nose blowing and toilet paper wiping?
Date: October 02 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Milked
Wow! I love it, it's perverse and dark as F. Next? If it was me I'd have him get yanked from the waterbottle cover and found in the morning at her feet. Then I'd have her notice that his lips are chapped and slightly split, examining him she sees his tongue dried out and crusty. That would be the cue for her to insert a finger into his mouth to rub some medicine, thus torturing his psyche even more. What else? IDK... More shrinking obviously and perhaps discovering whats up with her feet. I am stoked no matter what you do!
Author's Response:
I think that idea is great! Definitely going to include that. More shrinking and wacky motherly love is on the way. (And a new character within the next couple of chapters!!!!)