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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

Lets just hope she doesnt move in her sleep... ;) lol

Reviewer: IronWolfLEAF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

Loving it so much so far man, great work and thank you for making this! Hooked and looking forward to the next chapter haha if you were looking for ideas, maybe an unaware trip to work in mom’s shoes courtesy of bratty sister? 😂

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

You have something amazing going on here.. The elements that you brought here are in harmony and my lust is going up in a never ending spiral. I wish this to be a long story and hope it is updated every month at least. I loved it pls dont drop this.



Author's Response:

Thank you !!! I will update it soon! let me know what tags you like the most (feet/unaware/aware/ types of characters)

Reviewer: teradonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

love your story. dont know if you're into this, but id love to see a scenario where hes less than an inch tall and he gets trapped under her asshole as shes masturbating and she farts on him and hes helplessly aroused.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

Love the first chapter with interaction of duster. Hoping for vore or insertion

Author's Response:

Thank you, i like your suggestions aswell. let me know in more detail if theres anything youd like to see in the story. take care.

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

Not bad at all!

I hope that Jeremy's mother while asleep mistakes his body for her hot water bottle. I also hope that she has gorgeous feet. You've sort of hinted at something, with all of the foot care products in her room. If so, who knows why she doesn't show them off and keeps them always in shoes except when sleeping. Hmm. I also hope the oil scene is repeated, the poor boy ejaculating several more times to increase his amount of shrinkage.

I'm enjoying it and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

haha nice one. Yes the hot water bottle was a big hint! i'll write it up soon. 

Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

Woah... I am just speechless right now!

First I got to say I love how you added extra details and extended the first chapter, it definitely changed the setting/tone of the story. Don't get me wrong, I thought the original one was pretty good but you took it to a whole other level and it shows that you've put in a lot of work to setting up the whole story and the interactions with Jeremy and his family.

This second chapter just continues the awesome flow from the previous one that I got so immerse in it that next thing I know the chapter is over. Simply amazing!

Love the whole scene between the mother and Jeremy and how she is completely obviously of what she is actually doing to him.

Really excited to see where this goes from here. Keep up the amazing writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you! hope you enjoy the rest! 

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