Date: September 16 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
İ think you have found a very nice plot and your descriptions are good. Kepe up the good work! A part where he is in her slipper or stuck to the her sole by her sweat would be nice! And maybe some sadistic aware humiliations from some other relatives.. Anyway İ believe you will write it nice whatever you choose to wrire! Dont make us wait too much,yes:)
Author's Response:
Hope you're enjoying it so far! i will try to include some aware humiliations!
Date: September 16 2018 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Your story has fantastic descriptions i love it! If possible, one of my favorite scenarios is if he goes up her nose unaware. I saw your nose tag, so i figured this was a possibility. Great job so far!
Author's Response:
I'd love to write about this scenario and i probably will :) In the next chapter i will leave some poll options for people to vote so i have an idea of what people like.
Date: September 15 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Sorry typo.. duster was suppose to be sister
Date: September 05 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Great work!
+) Have you ever think about in-shoe story?
Author's Response:
Yes, i have. I like the situation of being stuck inside a giantess' shoe. Might be fun to write about.
Date: August 29 2018 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Hey! Definitely love the direction of where the story is going so far! You got a pretty interesting idea going on with not being able to move. Definitely can see a situation where the mother accidentally sits on him but mistakes him for a pillow and maybe if he gets smaller as a toy by her or other family/friends!
I definitely enjoy unaware situations where the character gets sat on or mistaken for something else.
Can't wait for the second chapter!! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response:
yeah thanks for the review and the ideas, i will definitely use them! And im the same, i prefer unaware situations where the character is mistaken for something else so i'm all for writing that. I have a couple of mistaken objects in mind already but i'm keen to hear more from reviewers.
Date: August 26 2018 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
Nice story. My top three favorite, are when a tiny gets swallowed whole by an unaware giantess, and lives while coming out the other end, when a tiny male gets trapped in an unaware females womb, and changes into the females daughter through unbirth, and when a tiny gets caught in a vagina during sex, and lives through it.
Author's Response:
Thanks glad you enjoyed! I like those aswell!
Date: August 26 2018 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle
I like the concept you have here. Not sure how I feel about the whole "not being able to move" thing, that tells me that a lot will happen and that Jeremy is in for a wild ride.