You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2019 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

my dreams crushed. another one bites the dust

Reviewer: el_veneno Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2019 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Sorry to see you go - I was more interested in where this story was going than most of the others on this site. Hope things are well, and don't sweat it - porn's not the most important thing in the world.

Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2019 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Thanks for continuing this story - this is incredible! What a cliffhanger

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Still hoping for some unaware misaki foot crushing but this chapter was still great!

Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2019 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Loving this story so much!! Hoping to see more from you soon.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2019 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Just found this story and I'm loving it.  It has a bit more feet stuff than I care for but the scenario is awesome.  Plenty of sexy unaware scenes and Felicity hits so many right buttons for me as a character.  Cute, sexy, airhead mom who keeps herself in shape and loves her son but unawarely torments him.  And poor Jeremy going through all that while being unable to move and shrinking for his trouble.  I look forward to seeing this story continue.

Will Felicty find Jeremy and realize what's happening?  Will Eleanor rescue him or mess with him more so she can have their mom all to herself?  I'll just have to wait and find out.



Author's Response:

Thanks man!  It's been fun writing so far! Its about time for Eleanor to get some time in the spotlight and there will hopefully be some world-building coming up to expand the story. Please let me know if you have any ideas, requests or suggestions.

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Intersting introduction ;)

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2019 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Forgot to leave my rating, I absolutely love this story and I was pretty upset when I thought it had been abandoned, I'm glad you're back

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2019 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Id absolutely love some unaware foot action with misaki, maybe even some unaware crushing

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2019 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

hopefully you havent forgotten about this.  Would love to see it continued

Reviewer: Starlord73 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

More of the mom

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Love the story so far. I don’t know if you plan on making the main character really small or not but if so then an idea I had was have him so small that his mother’s thong string is a vast landscape for him. Just an idea to throw in some butt stuff. Can’t wait for the next chapter I’m curious what will happen at the gym

Reviewer: Nathan 2018 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

You’re welcome Daftpunk for the feedback , also I do mean both tissue for nose blowing and toilet wiping.

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2018 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Somehow missed this gem when it was first uploaded but good lord am I glad that I read it. The parts with the foot warmer and 'grabbing the thread' were a fantastic idea. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2018 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

@amazonianniall True, having her shoving her toes into his mouth thinking its another object was seriously a top thing in that chapter!! From the smallest to the biggest!

 

Btw amazonianniall I remembered your name when I saw it. Your story Miss Smiths Revenge is also very good. I remember I reviewed it a few years ago, hope for it to be updated one day.

Reviewer: Nathan 2018 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

My favourite kind of stories 😊

Author's Response:

Cheers mate. :)

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2018 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Nice edit of chap 1!

I really hope the little sister will torture her brother so he shrinks further.

Perhaps having her teasing her brother that if he shrinks too much she might gulp him up.. oh my!



Author's Response:

Yes he'd better watch out for her teen braces! they'd leave a mark for sure! She's out to get him.

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

I absolutely love unaware, I hope that she ends up wearing him in shoe. Whatever you do I know it'll be fantastic. The last chapter so far is pretty amazing, thanks for a good read! My only complaint is that I can't get enough of it

Author's Response:

Just between you and me i am hoping to do some inshoe moments in the future! Thanks for the idea, keen to hear any others you have.

Reviewer: Boldman222 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2018 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Damn man! I haven't been this invested in a story in a long time. Any idea when the 4th chapter will be coming out? I cannot wait to see what happens to Jeremy next!



Author's Response:

I try to get a chapter done each weekend but if i have during the week i'll give it a go!

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Fav tags that story has without a doubts is unaware, feet and odor. It would be nice to have Slow Size Change, because with the nice setup you've done it taking things slowly would make it really enjoyable.

The way that the mother is so clumsy and it makes the main character suffer because of that is really really good. I'd love to see some in-shoe action in those worn out shoes/boots/sneakers that she has.



Author's Response:

i think you will really like the next few chapters then! i'll try to update this weekend

You must login (register) to review.