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Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2019 5:13 PM Title: In the Aftermath

was a very good story to read



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2019 4:02 PM Title: In the Aftermath

Im surprised Roni stepped in you're right in that I didn't see that coming. Nice that Fulda has a bit of equal size time with her tiny husband. But I must say that I did secretly hope we saw Gina demolishing some more stuff.

And Akane got me. I almost thought Fulda would stay tiny forever. I'm glad to see that thats not the case.

I'm almost starting to feel sorry for Gina. If she wasn't so insane, she would easily have a nice life, a boyfriend and a school that was nicely built for her 50ft stature. But no, she just had to bully basically everyone in her life.

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to that epilogue.



Author's Response:

I thought it would be poetic justice to have Gina done in by the friend she was trying to mold in her own image before she could go on too much of a rampage.  

I'm expecting a bit of blowback on Fulda not spending enough time tiny, and if so it'll be reasonable.  Akane does have a point in that she's done a lot of damage and that'd be an appropriate punishment.  But then, one of the people who's suffered most has forgiven her and wants her to be big.  I was torn between the two, but I'm not going to make all my readers happy, so I went with what I thought was best.

Maybe Gina is to be pitied.  It's not her fault she was given the ability to shrink people at a young age and let the power go to her head.  But she could've used it for good too, and instead chose to do what she did.

And thank you for reviewing!  I hope the epilogue is as satisfying as I expect it'll be.

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