Date: August 29 2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
You're doing great! And I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: You make me want to post a new chapter every day! But I will have to slow down a bit. I don't want the quality of the story to suffer because I'm rushing it.
Date: August 29 2018 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is great! I do like the story progression even if there wasnt as muxh feet related stuff in this 3rd chapter. Not sure where your heading but i think it would be awesome if he ordered her new comfort shoes and found a way to sneak into them and surprise her!
Author's Response: That would be dangerous! Look at what happened to poor Rajesh. He almost didn't make it!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2018 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Gotta say "Old" Chapter 2 is just as Awesome as "New" Chapter 2. I just finished reading this chapter and I'm already eager for the next one. Can't wait to see how she reacts when and how she fnds out.
I had it set so that I'd get updates for each of your stories individualy, adjusted it so I'll get a heads up for any other stories you might write. Greatly enjoying all of them so far after all
Author's Response: I'm tinkering around with a third story. It's percolating in my head. It wouldn't be as long as my current stories, but I love the idea. I'll probably start jotting it down soon.
Date: August 28 2018 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really like the new chapter (and the interlude chapter in there as well). Starting to set up the rest of the story. Definitely not goint too fast. In fact, I'm already anticipating the next chapter. Great playful dynamic with Alexa, I can imagine how much she will tease him once she finds out, let alone when they finally meet up in person.
Oh, was meaning to ask in my prior review, do you have a specific description or image/actual person that Alexa and Stephanie are based off of? Always interesting to visualize the characters as the author dreams them up (or bases them off of).
Author's Response: My characters are not based off real people. I've tried in the past to write stories, like you're saying, with characters based off a particular celebrity or whatever. That just doesn't work for me. You'd think it would be easier, right? I guess I prefer doing things the hard way.
I've seen writers who post something like a bio page at the beginning of their stories, with a list of all the characters and their measurements, eye color, hair color, etc. That doesn't work for me either. I prefer to spread those details throughout the story, kind of like a puzzle. I also like to be a little vague, on purpose. The reader's imagination can fill in the gaps. I think too much detail can be as bad as no detail at all.