Date: October 10 2018 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
More coming? Please???
Date: September 11 2018 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are doing an awesome job! Looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: I will have to get started on the next chapter soon! I've been busy lately, which is causing delays in my writing progress. I do wish to continue my stories, but I'm hesitant to speculate on the time table. Sorry for making everyone wait.
Date: August 30 2018 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love where you're taking this!
Author's Response: Stick around, this is only the beginning! Wait until you see the chapter I'm working on now... It's a doozie.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
The Downsizing movie itself was a bit dated. It seemed like a 15 year old script that was held up until the producers found money. One more thought about the film: Christolfe Waltz alluded to his relationship with his full sized wife but, unfortunately, the topic wasn't explored.
Unlike the movie, this story is great. Excellent pace, with detailed and well written descriptions about thoughts and motivation. The dialogue is also great, whether it's during the TV interview or when Alexa is finally face timed but has to go before she finds out about the reduction.
Thanks for the beginning of what appears to be a classic. My sincere hope is that every facet of the giantess genre is explored. Unlike some, I'm good with gentle, humiliation, or anger. Guess Who can flat out write! Even the responses to the reviews are entertaining in and of themselves.
PS-- I'm a Couples fan-- thought I'd slip that in to this review! It doesn't matter if Guess Who goes there or not because I'm in--no matter what is included. Thanks for the amazing entertainment.
Author's Response: If by Couples you mean Dan and Alexa having a full on relationship, you can count on that! It may not even stop there, but I don't want to spoil too much of the story. Be careful of elevating my writing beyond the level of amateur smut. I may not prove worthy of such high praise. I do try to make my stories entertaining!
Date: August 29 2018 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
::now that I've had some more coffee::
I completely understand that you don't want to burn yourself out. But I have to say, if this isn't the good part, I don't know if I can wait for the good stuff!
And just to add my two cents, I agree with the guy who was hoping the movie would have gone in this direction.
Author's Response: As far as the movie, I understand why it was lacking the "good stuff". It clearly wasn't intended to be smutty. I'm assuming they wanted a mainstream film that anyone could watch, like Honey I Shrunk the Kids. I know a lot of GTS fans were disappointed with the way the movie turned out, but as someone who writes fiction for a hobby, I can honestly say that I loved the movie! There were innuendos in that movie that I think more than a few people missed. They were dropping some serious hints at relationships between normal people and downsized people. I was a little disappointed by the GTS community's almost universal disapproval of the movie.
Date: August 28 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I understand, it was not my intention to unnerve you, certainly not to any extent, let alone like in Misery. I never said you insulted me, nor did I mean to insinuate it. I have no expectations of you, I was asking you to change anything at all. Your writing is your writing, not mine, do as you see fit with it.
When I said "I need more positive macrophilia stories in my life" I wasn't asking you to do anything, merely being forthcoming about myself.
I have a habit of coming off as if I want authors to change their writing for me, even if I specically say its not their work that bothers me per se, perhaps I could have made that clearer.
I'm not asking anything of you, or any author, I am merely stating what I'd like to see more of, and believe me, if I could write stories I would, but I'm not talented enough for that, hence the conundrum I find myself in, of alienating authors and making them think I bare them ill will.
I. DO. NOT. MEAN. ANY. ILL. WILL.
Author's Response: You have not offended me. I am neither upset, nor angry. But it concerns me when someone tells me something like this: "And my heart certainly can't take it in fiction. I use fantasy to escape cruelty IRL."
My stories are pure fiction. They have nothing to do with reality. Whatever issues you are dealing with "IRL", I cannot help you with them. My stories were never intended to be therapeutic. I write smut. And I always make certain to include the disclaimer that my work is not appropriate for all audiences. I am not here to ruin anyone's day. I've issued all the warnings I could think of to prevent that from happening. There's not much else I can say. I wish you well. I can't guarantee my stories will always make you happy. There's no "safe space" to be found here. You should probably stop reading my stories.
Date: August 26 2018 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great set-up, look forward to what will happen next. Hopefully the next chapter is ready ASAP, I can't wait. I appreciate the attention to great detail to make it as realistic as possible.
I can't wait to find out Alexis's reaction. While I guess that she will be generally playful, I hope there is a least one chapter where the ex somehow is involved and can (or at least attempt) some revenge, given how even more disgusted she would be. Maybe something like after many visits from "Small Town" to see Alexa, maybe by accident they ship him to his ex wife's house accidentally by switching up the addresses on his file. Could you imagine her reaction to finding him arrive a few inches tall?
Author's Response: No worries, the next chapter will be ready soon. It's already written. Now I'm struggling to improve it in any small way I can think of. It's good, like really good, but I think I can make it just a tiny bit better. I see that you're thinking very far ahead in the plot. I'm sure many interesting things will happen between now and then. Stay tuned!
Date: August 25 2018 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the story so far and I can't wait for more!!! I even made an account to tell you this :D
Also just as a suggestion of something to add to the story if you don't have something else in mind ( I hope you aren't troubled by me guessing how I generally hope the story will develop ):
Alexa is revealed to be an extremely capable and influencable woman who has connections to the people in charge of the reducing. She is currently just managing as the boss at Daniel's workplace for fun or practice for the future. She has extreme connections to the people in charge of the reducing and thus she can visit Daniel in person when she finds out he shunk if she didn't originally or possibly she sent him the box with her shoes knowing that he did ;)
Author's Response: I appreciate the review! I really do. All of the positive feedback helps keep me excited about writing. Please feel free to share your opinions and ideas. I've already planned this story out quite a bit, and I don't know if it will play out exactly like you are expecting, but I suspect you won't be disappointed.
Date: August 25 2018 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, thanks for the heads up.
Date: August 25 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad I can atleast offer input.
Author's Response: I welcome feedback, whether it's good, bad, or somewhere inbetween. I only request people submit their comments in a polite and respectful manner, which is a rule I follow myself. Read the next chapter once it's posted. If you don't like that chapter, it's a safe bet you won't like the rest of the story. And just a heads up, I'm working on another brand new story that will feature EXTREME humiliation, like public humiliation. So I suppose that will not be up your alley. Maybe I'll add an additional humiliation warning to my usual foot stuff warning for that one.
Date: August 25 2018 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the sound of this so far, I just hope there won't be any humiliation or subjugation. I never like that even in gentle giantess stories. I'm wary everytime a giantess story mentions "worship" or calls women "goddesses".
Author's Response: Can't promise that it will be a "feel good" story 100% of the time, but I wasn't planning to make it all about humiliation. As far as woman worship, that kind of goes with the territory. The focus of my stories is typically the giant women. Yeah, it's all about them. Don't know what to say... I'm here for the giantess.
I find your criticism refreshing though. Normally I get something like, TOO MUCH FEET. You may end up not liking my stories. I know I can't make everyone happy.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2018 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another great start! You’re pretty much doing this story how we all hoped that movie would go. I can understand Daniel not wanting to take another chance with a relationship after what happened with his ex-wife. That’s one of my greater fears in life honestly. Excited to see Alexa’s reaction when she finds out about his new stature.
Personally, I think this is a very good amount of feet. Could maybe even do with some more haha.
Author's Response: Be careful what you ask for! lol I think you will like the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 24 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Daniel, he didn't have much luck with is (ex-)wife. Which makes it even more surprising that he moves to a town that his ex-wife can basically crush in a heartbeat. It's not a safe place to live for him.
On the other hand, Alexa seems nice and they could possibly have some fun. I hop Alexa will pay him a visit after learning his size and not crush him immediately. This story has so much potential.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: I agree, the theme has tons of potential, maybe too much for a single story. At any rate, I will try to keep things interesting. I want to cover some things going on in the world around the characters, not just get caught up on them alone.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2018 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
You're off to a GREAT start! I can't wait to see where it goes. And to answer your question? There's no such thing as too much feet.
Author's Response: Haha, I agree! But I have been told differently in the past. Thankfully I am too stubborn to listen.
Date: August 24 2018 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start.can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Believe it or not, chapters 2, 3, and 4 are basically done! However! I decided to write a whole new chapter 2, and push the other chapters back until the new chapter 2 is finished. I'm not scrapping anything, adding MORE actually. But this will cause a small wait. Apologies for that!
Date: August 24 2018 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story so far! I can't wait to see what happens between these two. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: This ought to be a fairly long story. You should have plenty to read! I do have an ending planned out, but the middle of the story can be as long as I want.