Reviewer: Coolio Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2022 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Huge fan of your work hope you will return to this one day

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I won't be adding any more to Camilla but I plan to start posting a new story within a couple months.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2019 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good ending if a little bit tragic and sad, but with just a hint of optimism. I'm really sad Mark has PTSD from this treatment. He's been hurt pretty bad in all this. A true victim. 

Didn't suspect such a dramatic heel turn from Chloe, but I'm glad that got nipped before it got really bad for Mark. 

Even a flashback to a spanking was brutal. Good writing. 

A great story overall. I originally felt like the virus changing the brains of the woman might have been a cop out, but re-reading a bit and it works and adds a little more tragedy to the story. Like if that optimism does come to flourish and the virus beaten, the woman realize what they've been doing that makes them victims too in a way. A lot to think on with this story and I want to read more about this world. 

Thanks for writing it. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate it!  As for the virus, I wasn't actually planning to add that to the scene originally, but there was enough confusion with regard to what was happening in the story that I felt it was important to put in some description of this explicitly.  I really meant for it to be apparent from as early as a few chapters in that there was some unnatural psychological change happening to women alongside the physical changes, which was warping their view of right and wrong, etc.  Anyway, it wasn't coming across as I intended, hence the inclusion of this plot element explicitly in the last couple chapters.  (I put more discussion on this on Giantess City just now, if you're interested.)

Thanks for reading!