What's with the voliance in chapters 3 and 4.  Yeah I get defending yourself against and aggressor (3), but three women just letting Lynn do that to Phil for what 45 minutes and over what her daughter being a touch distressed that daddy raised his voice at her darling.  I mean how would males react today if one of their "side" did that at the least police would of been called.  You know injuries were inflected or Phil would of been at the send off.

Hoping Camilla listens to her conscience, she knows what Lynn did was wrong, to blithley state "that's the way things are' isn't how decent people regardless of thier power should act.  Maybe she calms down and realizes she overreacted with her dad (wanting to hurt him and enjoying the prospect), and that maybe her, Carly and Hannah should check on Phil.  Maybe confront Lynn on it, perhaps start thinking how they would like if the shoe was on the other foot (Camilla keeps stating it's for the 'men's' benefit would like her to place herself in Phil and her father's shoes before accepting things as they are and maybe try adjusting things so that even if the world is female dominant Males would get some protection-and not like the MOB 'protection' they are currently getting and more then pet awards for learning how to cook from ground start! (college level effort but men are 'simple')Would like for Phil to be her canary in the coal mine and know if he is being abused then it is wrong for her to do it.

80-90% of men through out history have been decent, hard working and kind to their suposes, it's the 1 to 2% that ruin it for the rest.  It seems that at least 25% of women in your world (perhaps 90%) just want to play wack a male for petty reasons.

Finally after 'disciplining' Phil for 45 minutes for one sentence out of line what does Lynn think Mia's going to do to him and others even though she disobeyed her as well maybe Camilla could bring that up.  As with other reviewers we'll see were this goes...

This is getting to be an large bit on the dark side for me, the first two chapters were good if not very good, but at the end of the fourth you are starting to lose me.  From implication Phil at best had his head yelled off by Lynn and at worst was beaten within an inch of his life for what raising his voice to his own child?  Did Lynn the disciplatary punish her wonderful Mia for not follow her instructions?  Does she care that her actions will lead to Mia hurting, raping and/or killing poeple cause nothing happens to her, but she makes the least sound and mommy beats the living Sh!t out of daddy so it's ok!

Camilla knows Lynn is wrong, next chapter or one after I would like for her to see what her go along to get along attitude created and see Phil as hurt as he is, perhaps even take him as a morality center on how far to go while estiblishing domanince.  It's too easy to say men are meat targets without rights and any assult wouldn't be followed up by the police, if men did that there would be no civilization.

I am hoping in the next few Chapters Camilla at least gets to grey anti-hero status, in that yes she's moving her father to reality, but she also sees things she can change (such as Phil's status) and works to help men at least land on a pillow rather then spikes you seem to have set up for them.  That she moves Carly and Hannah her way and possibly moves Lynn to a redemation arc.

It stared great and I will withhold judgement for the next couple of chapters, but if I want burtality and humans being treated worse then slaves and/or stray animals I will watch cows being butchered...