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Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know how I didn't stumble upon this sooner! Love the little twist with her ending up being the Queen, and I am interested to see how their relationship plays out! Great story so far and I look forward to more.



Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter. I fear I may have gotten a little carried away with this one! It will really be something. I had intended for it to be a short interlude type of chapter, but it may end up being the longest chapter in the story.

Reviewer: Marussia Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd force the bandits to suck out every drop of poison from her feet using magic

Author's Response: I like the way you think!

Reviewer: bbw liebhaber Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2018 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Again a nice chapter keep it up.



Author's Response: I'm having fun with this story. The last chapter was basically free form writing. I have some future chapters already planned. Can't say how long this story will be yet, but I'll probably continue until I run out of ideas.

Reviewer: Shrinkwolf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2018 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

A good Start!



Author's Response: You better keep reading if you liked the beginning. It should only get better from here.

Reviewer: bbw liebhaber Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2018 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice first chapter i hope the two will be a nice couple.



Author's Response: I believe they will have an interesting relationship, perhaps a bit strained at times.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wanna read more!

Author's Response: There will be lots more to read. I can guarantee that much.

Reviewer: Vintovka Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2018 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really looking forward to a more substantive addition to this, I like the start.



Author's Response: Buckle up! It's gonna get weird.

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