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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2018 5:36 AM Title: Surreal Reality

This is such a lovely and original story, I love it!

You did such a great job of getting us to feel for ben with some backstory.

It also combines both gentle (to Ben) and more cruel (her new host).

This story has so much potential, three chapters seem a bit to few.

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

You're far too kind.

I know, I know. I'm horrible.

I'm at least trying to give the last chapter some pizzazz to make up for it, plus it'll be just a bit longer than the first chapter.

I'm having fun typing it but expect a short wait period. Check back once a day and it should but up soon. I'm introducing a character and adding a bit more giantess action.

In addition Athena shows her more mischievous side, but like she promised, Ben never actually gets bullied or hurt from her actions. <3

Anyways thank you for the feedback, it means a lot.

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