Date: January 19 2019 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Visit
Poor Agatha. Split between being good and being a... well, Mandy. Hopefully she sticks to her guns this time. Mandy must be starving.
Good ol' sexy Natalya though... she's got it baby. Can't wait to see how this one unfolds. I know it'll be a good time.
Date: January 19 2019 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Visit
You know, part of me feels bad for Agatha. It’s hard having a friend grow apart from you. Maybe trying to have a person swallowed whole might be going a little too far, but who am I to judge? Jessica is apparently tasty.
The tastiest ;D
Date: January 16 2019 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Visit
OMG, Agatha, you flip-flop more than a politician! Make up your damn mind!
Jealousy and hatred can really do a number on you, especially when you're a pretentious lad such as Agatha. Tsk tsk. Also it's nice to see you back! Been missing your reviews ;)
Date: January 15 2019 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Visit
Honestly really didn't like how easily manipulated Agatha was. It's like Madison said "It's just a birthday party." A persons birthday party that you put a Hit on them 2 months ago and then said sorry I won't do it ever again. I think a person with common sense would understand why they wouldn't be invited. I'm just frustrated that it's basically repeating the same thing again of Agatha says she's good but one little thing turns her against Jessica again. I know it's just a fetish story, but to me it's a boring plot line. I hope Frizzle has a twist for agatha working with Mandy and Natalya again.
The dialogue is important in this one. If you saw it's really the fact that she feels she is losing Kali as a friend, and blames Jessica for this.
Ultimately Agatha is dangerously jealous, and despite *trying* to be a decent person her nature is simply that of chaos. I'm sorry it's boring for you, I tried my best but I guess I could have done better.
Thanks for reading!
Date: January 14 2019 4:13 PM Title: *Volume I* - Chapter 1 - Good Morning Seattle
Wow, what a chapter. I was not expecting this, but I was expecting Anya's reaction. I'm also very mad about the whole Krissy telling what happened. Like, just because you can't have it, don't ruin another person's relationship. I'm glad Anya and Jessica had a good relationship, and I'm glad they had a bump, because there's no just thing as a perfect relationship. I also loved the ass content, and hopefully she warms up yo that too. Loved it, keep up the great work.
Date: January 12 2019 7:25 PM Title: *Volume I* - Chapter 1 - Good Morning Seattle
Cops, I say again Cops, call the Cops :-), great chapter but Jess, Ayna, Kali (well maybe not her with Agtha but...) CALL the POLICE-LOL.
Sorry love the story, but logic compells... :-), keep up it...
Lol I'm just gonna say this... the cops will eventually be called lol. I'm on chapter 51 now but you mention cops so often I thought I'd put your mind at ease lol ;)
Date: January 11 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Crack Of Dawn
The hell? Anya you gots ta be checking your crevices every morning if you're going to be sleeping with Jessica every night.
Wonder what Natalya's doing with Agatha though. Maybe strongarm her into kidnapping Jessica? That'd be lovely.
Date: January 08 2019 3:27 PM Title: *Volume I* - Chapter 1 - Good Morning Seattle
Chapter 31 is fucking awesome
I have some more chapters in volume 3 that are considered the best chapters I've ever written. I cannot wait till the get posted later on!
Date: January 08 2019 3:16 PM Title: *Volume I* - Chapter 1 - Good Morning Seattle
This story has come a looooong way now have been following it from the very first chapter .
And it'll be going much further! This story has a lot to cover before it concludes :) thanks for reading!
Date: January 08 2019 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Anya's Bedside Manner
Oh gods yes! I was waiting/hoping for this moment ever since their first little date long ago! And the fact that it was unaware is just icing on the cake. And everyone knows icing is the best part of cake.
Still ongoing too! Can't wait to see what happens next while Jessica is in my third favorite place for a tiny to be ;)
Date: January 07 2019 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Anya's Bedside Manner
Oh my god, frizzle, this is an end almost as if you request suggestion for every buttaction lover of the world :) And if you ever listen to suggestions (i know you do) dont let Anya notice that little passanger to early, the later the better.. perhaps even put on her panties and keep Jessica trapped while having breakfast.. and some excuse why she didnt wonder where her girlfriend went before Anya even got up :) This could even destroy the relationship to her but actually at such an ending peding.. i dont care.. even if Anya leting loose one with her girlfriend trapped in place :>
ooh this suggestion probably went over the top, anyway nice chapter :)
Well suggestions here dont mean much sadly. I'm already on chapter 50 so I wrote the next chapter long ago lol.
But... no need to worry ;) just wait and see the next chapter ;)