Date: September 14 2018 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Insatiable
Your writing is uh hot, just line Melina. Lucas and Melina also seem to like eachother very much.
I'm a little curious about the world Lucas landed in, but I hope we will hear more about that in the next chapter(s)?
Also, thank you for writing!
Date: August 27 2018 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
From the first chapter this has been an amazingly descriptive story, I could actually feel like I saw what he was seeing. That level of immersion translating in this last chapter is quite.... incredible! Keep up the great work! Looking forward to ch 10 for sure now!
Date: August 26 2018 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Closer
Oh my... this was an incredible turn of events. I thought they were going to be shy to each other for a while more, but I'm glad I was wrong.
Thanks for this excellent story. It's amazing so far!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! Reviews are kind of addictive for us authors, especially if they are supportive like yours! I could have kept Lucas and Melina in pent frustration for a few more chapters but they could not keep their hands from each other. I think they deserved their happy time . [and letís be honest, we both know why we are at websites such as this one ;-) I could not wait to write this part, and more to come!]
Date: August 16 2018 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaner
This story is still cute, and it will be a challenge for Lucas and Melina to understand eachothers language. But Lucas is a fast learner, or at least I hope.
I am curious about the place he landed. He probably won't be able to go back to Brazil, but at least he is safe with Melina.
Switching perspective back and forth between Lucas and Melina is also nice because it gives us an isight into the thoughts of both. A well thought out move.
Also, thank you for writing, I really enjoyed these chapters.
Date: August 15 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Repossesed
This is a very interesting story so far. She really seems like a gentle giantess, even if she has those sudden urges that she seems to control for now. And I'm very interested to find out what will happen next. Like, will we get to a part where he learns her language?
Anyways, you wanted to tell you I'm loving the story so far. It's really well written, so I'll be keeping my eyes on it and leaving a review every chance I get.
Date: August 15 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Repossesed
You are progressing well, and I only found a couple of gramatical mistakes (use of a wrong gender pronoun, and "(she was already, insentiently, thinking of Lucas as hers)"; I am still trying to figure out the word I underlined? As near as I could guess, you might have meant 'insensitively'... right or wrong?
Date: August 10 2018 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Very god story! I'm a little bit sad everytime I'm at the end of a chapter, because I know I can't read more of the story!
Its very well written and its nice to see the thoughts of both protagonists. Both are so cute.
You're really taking us on an adventure!
Thanks for writing, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: August 06 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
This has been a gread read so far. It was pretty good reading about both character's point of view of the situation and what each one thought about their own bodies and the other's.
I hope to see more of this story. It has been great!