Date: December 20 2018 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Teased
I like this format with both views of Lucas and Melina. I also like the fact that you write detailed descriptions of both their bodies, how they look, how they feel, the scent, etc. You are an amazing writer and I'm glad we have you here.
Date: December 13 2018 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
OMG! Amazing, keep it up. Now that Melina has 'taken care of' Lucas's issues, it maybe time for him to do some more cave diving for her...
Love the Gentle, playful yet dominate and mischivous Melina, she is well paired with the brave, daring and rougish Lucas. Awesome story!
Date: December 07 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Whipped
Gentle consensual stories like this melt me. I'm glad I found this story, after reading the first chapter I nearly sighed in relief. Amongst all the cruel versions of this fetish that disgust and depress me, stories lile this are preetty much some of the best I've ever read. Mark and Zava and now this can pgo down in history as the most romantic, sensuous, heartmeltingly happy and sexy macrophilia literature I've come across so far.
Thank you so much for sharing this...Words aren't good enough to explain how happy founding this made me...
Date: December 07 2018 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
You are batting a 1000! Lucas and Melina are awesome together, though Lucas now has to be careful, he may of been 'too' sucessful in pleasing his gentle giantess... Hopefully Melina will adjust quickly and not bruise/turn to paste Lucas by accident...
Thank you for a wonderful story so far!
Date: December 05 2018 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Melina has tasted the 'forbiden fruit' and found it VERY MUCH TO HER LIKING! Hope Lucas can keep it up cause though Melina is a gentle giantess she may of been given a 'gift' by him that she can't help but to use.
she wouldn't deliberately hurt him, but he has just pressed her pleasure center hard! She's going to crave it now, he may of 'simulated' a bit too well. Though Melina is a good soul and Lucas will do what he can, he just has to be careful around the hungry V he has awakened...
Date: November 19 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Lucas
Great Story, good well thought out characters and reactions, Please continue, also noticed you have done Mark and Zava any chance of that story continuing as well (please say yes). Thank you!
Hello and thank you for reading and taking the time to review. Indeed Mark and Zava will continue, and I have another chapter half written. Keep checking for updates!
Date: September 14 2018 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Insatiable
Your writing is uh hot, just line Melina. Lucas and Melina also seem to like eachother very much.
I'm a little curious about the world Lucas landed in, but I hope we will hear more about that in the next chapter(s)?
Also, thank you for writing!