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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 12:35 AM Title: Epilogue

This was perfect!

A perfect epiloque for this story, full of sweetness, tenderness, more strenghtening of their bond and their future together. 

Some nice steamy (and I mean both figuratively and literally) scenes with the shower and stripping, as well as their conversation and interaction in the shower. 

And I love Jackie using her sock as a sleeping bag. 

Again, I have to thank you for sharing this story with us, I won't go on too long as I expressed most of my thoughts in my review of the last chapter.

But again, I just want to thank you for bringing us on this journey, and I am excited for more of your writing in future. 

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