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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2020 1:06 AM Title: Confrontation

Ok

Wow, I have to say this chapter fulfilled a lot of my Anti-Kali dreams XD

Jackie using the VR to have some happyness with Marleigh was a sad but touching scene, but it was followed up briliantly by bringing in real Marleigh. 

I love how Jackie vented her emotions at Marleigh instead of just running into her arms straight away. That was real, it showed a real emotional responce to everything she'd been through. 

And Yes YES!!! I am so happy that the Golden Pair are back together, I couldn't stand them being apart. 

And I loved how you had Jackie subject VR Kali to her feet and really put the fear she felt into Kali. And having Marleigh join in too for some mouth and vore play, VR-Kali got to experience all her alcohol tinged breath to it's maximum. 

XD Vindictive Jackie and Marleigh teaming up to reap some well deserved justice was delicious!!


Seriously though, this has been such a fantastic and engrossing story, I have followed since the beginning and I am going to be honest, this is emotional for me. Having followed these characters through their highs (and most recently, some lows), their growing relationship, sexual desires, family drama, relationship angst, the whole package. 

I am sad that this is coming to an end, though I am someone who doesn't like endings necessarily. 

I may seem to be rambling on a bit, but hopefully this comes off as showing my appreciation for you having given us this story, this is not just a short fetish/giantess fueled romp, but a proper story showcasing a number of genres, and an in depth look at the relationship these two people who come from vastly different social scales share and cultivated with one another. 

So again, thank you, thank you for sharing this with us, and thank you for bringing us into this world, and as you said it all started with a girl taking a ride home in a shoe, and yet here we are showing these same people having found love unexpectantly, but pleasingly so. 

Thank you. 

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