Reviews For Taking the "Bus"
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Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2020 2:30 PM Title: Usurper

Really glad Kali was caught. Keep up the great work!



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Thanks, glad you're enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 12:17 AM Title: Usurper

YES !!!! Yes! I am so glad Kali was caught in the act (thankfully not before she was able to finish Jackie off) 

Loved the foot/shoe interaction in this chapter though (despite not liking Jackie's situation and Kali being a bitch) you continue to write this series well. 

I am looking forward to more, and Marleigh and Jackie's reuinion :) 

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