Date: July 19 2020 1:49 AM Title: The Birthday Surprise
Love that you've returned to this story :D
Marleigh and Jackie are perfect together.
But Auurrghhhh, Marleigh's mother and sister are bad news. Alyssa seems like a bitch, and so does Krystal.
"I'll allow this relationship to go on. For now" That line pissed me off, it's not up to her who Marleigh dates or is in love with, she should just butt out and let her daughter be happy!
*(takes a calming breath)*
Anyway, as I said loving that you've returned to this story :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I definitely have more planned with this story, more planned out than original 16 chapters ever were. I'm glad after 17 chapters, the magic of their relationship hasn't worn off.
As for Krystal and Alyssa, Alyssa will come back later down the line and I adjusted her introduction in an earlier chapter as well as added a small cameo by her in another chapter. But if you think Marleigh's family is bad, just wait till the two meet Jackie's.
Any way, hope to see next time!