Reviews For Taking the "Bus"
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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2018 8:23 PM Title: Friends?

Awesome chapter!

Jackie and Carissa's interaction was nice and wholesome. You're doing a great job at organically getting them past what happened in the past between them.

The arcade place seems like a cool thing for them too. It could be a neat way for them to all interact at the same level, along with whatever other crazy stuff that sort of thing could cause.

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