Reviews For Taking the "Bus"
Reviewer: Sheograth Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2018 4:52 PM Title: Shopping their Problems Away
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I do defiantly plan to have Jackie and Carissa interact more in the next chapter, just them together without Marleigh to get more on friendly terms.
Date: November 07 2018 4:52 PM Title: Shopping their Problems Away
Great chapter again!
I'm glad that Jackie got to see Carissa defend her like that. It's a nice first step for them actually getting on friendly terms.
You also did a good job with the foot interaction near the end. Nicely detailed.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I do defiantly plan to have Jackie and Carissa interact more in the next chapter, just them together without Marleigh to get more on friendly terms.