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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2018 4:52 PM Title: Shopping their Problems Away

Great chapter again!

I'm glad that Jackie got to see Carissa defend her like that. It's a nice first step for them actually getting on friendly terms.

You also did a good job with the foot interaction near the end. Nicely detailed.

Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I do defiantly plan to have Jackie and Carissa interact more in the next chapter, just them together without Marleigh to get more on friendly terms.

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