Reviewer: Sheograth Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2018 8:01 PM Title: Facing her Fears

I really like how Carissa is attempting to atone for what she did in the past. I think her trying to defend micros was a good touch too. You're doing a great job of showing how she's actually remorseful now.

Hopefully the three of them can become friends in the future. I'm sure there could be plenty of cool interactions if they did.

I'm looking forward to how things go forward from here! Great job and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I noticed that as well in other stories, the girl who does the smashing, eating and other terrible things to the tiny people don't feel all too guilty or remorseful. I kind of wanted to add a twist to that by putting Carissa as a human who has done terrible things to Jackie as well as her friends. On the note of them being friends, I think so. Hopefully that will hopefully lead to more interactions between not only Marleigh and Jackie but with Carissa as well. Anyways, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2018 6:42 PM Title: Facing her Fears

Just more.

Author's Response: I will hope to have the next chapter out sooner rather than later, glad to see that you're itching for more!