Reviews For Taking the "Bus"
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Reviewer: GuessWho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 5:17 PM Title: The Second Ride

Another solid chapter! Honestly, I just want to read more. Don't even care if we have to wait a while for the "good stuff" to start. There's a serious lack of good stories on this site lately, but your story is good.

Reviewer: TheDuke Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 4:18 AM Title: The Second Ride

I thought you created a great universe after reading the first chapter. But after seeing rent is only $100 a month in the second chapter, I see you found a way to make a great universe even better. Keep up the good work, really looking forward to where this story goes

Reviewer: SuperD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 1:14 AM Title: The Second Ride

Another great chapter, I really like both Jackie and Marleigh and it feels great that both are interacting with one another. Your dialogue and the sheer detail of the multi size world is phenomenal and I think the story is so cute. This is easily the best thing I have read on this website in a long time. Hope you enjoy writing this as much as I enjoy reading it. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 1:00 AM Title: The Second Ride

I feel a lovely relationship or at least friendship bubbling.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2018 9:43 PM Title: The Second Ride

I am so glad you continued this! I wasn't sure if you were or not.

 

A great second chapter, I love how we get to see Jackie loosening up slightly around Marleigh, and opening up herself to interacting with humans.

During my reading of the first chapter I theorized there would be 'micro rights' groups like the woman who appeared in this chapter, talk about getting the wrong idea though.

I guess the micro bus service is a recent thing? or that woman seriously needs to look up micro-human related businesses if she doesn't know about the service.

 

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this second chapter, and eaglery await more. (also once again, Jackie is so damn lucky!!! getting the up front seat )

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