Date: October 24 2020 12:35 AM Title: Epilogue
This was perfect!
A perfect epiloque for this story, full of sweetness, tenderness, more strenghtening of their bond and their future together.
Some nice steamy (and I mean both figuratively and literally) scenes with the shower and stripping, as well as their conversation and interaction in the shower.
And I love Jackie using her sock as a sleeping bag.
Again, I have to thank you for sharing this story with us, I won't go on too long as I expressed most of my thoughts in my review of the last chapter.
But again, I just want to thank you for bringing us on this journey, and I am excited for more of your writing in future.
Date: October 20 2020 1:06 AM Title: Confrontation
Ok
Wow, I have to say this chapter fulfilled a lot of my Anti-Kali dreams XD
Jackie using the VR to have some happyness with Marleigh was a sad but touching scene, but it was followed up briliantly by bringing in real Marleigh.
I love how Jackie vented her emotions at Marleigh instead of just running into her arms straight away. That was real, it showed a real emotional responce to everything she'd been through.
And Yes YES!!! I am so happy that the Golden Pair are back together, I couldn't stand them being apart.
And I loved how you had Jackie subject VR Kali to her feet and really put the fear she felt into Kali. And having Marleigh join in too for some mouth and vore play, VR-Kali got to experience all her alcohol tinged breath to it's maximum.
XD Vindictive Jackie and Marleigh teaming up to reap some well deserved justice was delicious!!
Seriously though, this has been such a fantastic and engrossing story, I have followed since the beginning and I am going to be honest, this is emotional for me. Having followed these characters through their highs (and most recently, some lows), their growing relationship, sexual desires, family drama, relationship angst, the whole package.
I am sad that this is coming to an end, though I am someone who doesn't like endings necessarily.
I may seem to be rambling on a bit, but hopefully this comes off as showing my appreciation for you having given us this story, this is not just a short fetish/giantess fueled romp, but a proper story showcasing a number of genres, and an in depth look at the relationship these two people who come from vastly different social scales share and cultivated with one another.
So again, thank you, thank you for sharing this with us, and thank you for bringing us into this world, and as you said it all started with a girl taking a ride home in a shoe, and yet here we are showing these same people having found love unexpectantly, but pleasingly so.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2020 2:30 PM Title: Usurper
Really glad Kali was caught. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Date: October 16 2020 12:17 AM Title: Usurper
YES !!!! Yes! I am so glad Kali was caught in the act (thankfully not before she was able to finish Jackie off)
Loved the foot/shoe interaction in this chapter though (despite not liking Jackie's situation and Kali being a bitch) you continue to write this series well.
I am looking forward to more, and Marleigh and Jackie's reuinion :)
Date: October 10 2020 3:45 AM Title: Preemptive Strike
Kali!!!!!
ooof, I am both excited (for the feet content) while also pained that Jackie is being forced into this position by this bitch.
I am on the edge of my seat with excitement, and desire for Kali to get punched in the face.
You've done a fantastic job at keeping me hooked as always.
Date: October 04 2020 2:57 AM Title: Rising Tensions
I am anxious for what Jackie is going to go through, and am still pining for the golden pair that is Jackie and Marleigh.
Kali!!! Arghhh, she's going to make me despise her, I just know it.
Another great chapter of this story however, and it does make me excited (and anxious XD) for more to come.
Date: September 26 2020 3:09 AM Title: Division
Well....this broke my heart
Marleigh and Jackie were perfect, and I feel Jackie's pain here.
Like...ow, really I am devastated.
I do hope Jackie and Marleigh are still endgame, please don't keep them apart forever!
(Though with you saying Kali is the opposite later, maybe she becomes a total bitch)
Date: August 27 2020 12:23 AM Title: Lush or what?
Please please please let Marleigh and Jackie get back together!!! (after adressing what happened and apologies are given, etc)
They need to be together!!!!
XD Another great chapter (regardless of the golden pair being split up still)
Oh no!!! Jackie's in trouble!!!
Author's Response:
Sometimes, couples need breaks and sometimes they just drift. But in all seriousness, the golden couple will (eventually) get back together, don't you worry. Just might Jackie going through some monumental hoops to get the love of her life back. See you then!
Date: July 19 2020 1:49 AM Title: The Birthday Surprise
Love that you've returned to this story :D
Marleigh and Jackie are perfect together.
But Auurrghhhh, Marleigh's mother and sister are bad news. Alyssa seems like a bitch, and so does Krystal.
"I'll allow this relationship to go on. For now" That line pissed me off, it's not up to her who Marleigh dates or is in love with, she should just butt out and let her daughter be happy!
*(takes a calming breath)*
Anyway, as I said loving that you've returned to this story :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I definitely have more planned with this story, more planned out than original 16 chapters ever were. I'm glad after 17 chapters, the magic of their relationship hasn't worn off.
As for Krystal and Alyssa, Alyssa will come back later down the line and I adjusted her introduction in an earlier chapter as well as added a small cameo by her in another chapter. But if you think Marleigh's family is bad, just wait till the two meet Jackie's.
Any way, hope to see next time!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2019 12:10 AM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
Awesome finish to a excellent story! Maybe Straight for Ellie's Belly Chapter 3 next? :D
Author's Response: That is definitely on the horizon! Just needs a few tweaks and it should be good. Hope to have the 3rd chapter out very soon if life doesn’t get in the way! Any way, thank you for the kind words, very much appreciate it! :)
Date: April 08 2019 10:18 PM Title: Jackie's Retribution
Hmm. Lots of build up to Jackie's cathartic revenge on Carissa but then we didn't get to "see" what she did to her. I liked seeing her anger come out and how she was naming some of the classmates Carissa had murdered. But the simulation ended too quickly. It felt like that scene didn't quite reach its potential. Just my two cents. No offense meant.
Date: March 16 2019 12:07 PM Title: Taking the 'Bus'
I like this, it has feet and gentle giantess. Also has some evil.
I liked Carissa being in charge and I would like even more to see Carissa being a giantess in the city. Having both girls small. You know, Carissa being evil like her own past. But this time doing it because she know she is in a VR environment.
Also I want to say that I cant walt to see Jackie being a giantess goddess.
Date: March 06 2019 11:44 PM Title: Goddess Carissa
Loved the Carissa feet chapter! Really amazing, but I had hoped for a giantess Carissa in a city of tinies including Marleigh and Jackie. Still, really amazing and fun! I can't wait to see what an omnipotent Jackie is cooking up now that she is mad...hopefully mega Jackie?
Date: February 01 2019 11:34 PM Title: Fun in the City
Thank you so much for continuing this gem! This was a great chapter, but I can't wait to see how Carissa treats her tiny friends! They're going to have some big feet to explore!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2018 2:28 PM Title: VRcade
I just recently came back to this story after dropping it a few chapters in. I have to admit, I wasn't a big fan of the concept at the start, but I think you've done a really good job at writing this story. I'm a big fan of the main trio. I would hate to see anything break them apart. I would be good with something getting a bit dark, like Jackie having the power go to her head in the VRcade, or maybe one of the giantesses having a momentary lapse in judgement where their sexual fantasies overcome their rational brain and they take something too far with Jackie, but nothing that would fundamentally ruin the relationship between the three of them. I think you've built a good thing there and I would be sad to see it destroyed.
That's also my main cconcern with Alyssa. I don't mind her being in the story, as long as she doesn't become the main focus. There's a cliche in some giantess stories where the main gentle giantess doesn't realize how much of a threat a malicious giantess is to their tiny and keeps trying to get the tiny to be ok with the malicious giantess being around despite the tiny's protests and fear, even when the fear is completely justified. That's the kinda stuff that I dislike. But right now it appears that Marliegh is completely on Jackie's side on this front, and I hope it stays that way.
Author's Response: Thank you for giving the story another chance! I am having a harder time figuring out where to go in this VR world the trio will be spending in without causing some damage to their friendship. I have some ideas in mind but I really want to take my time writing these next few chapters. As for Alyssa's part of the story, she was supposed to be a "wolf in sheep's clothing" but I knew the stereotype you mentioned and how often it's been used so I went with the opposite. She might return in later chapters but in an unknown way, hopefully as a better character and villain to the group, in an unconventional way perhaps.
Date: December 24 2018 12:09 PM Title: VRcade
I've been checking this story out but haven't left a review yet. This is an interesting multi-size world you've created. The shoes converted into public transportation is a clever idea. Jackie and Marleigh's relationship is very sweet.
I have to be honest, I think Jackie is a better person than me. I would probably not be able to forgive Carissa. Even if she's repentant, this is someone who murdered and devoured doozens of people in front of Jackie, many of them her friends and classmates. I would not be able to be around someone who did that. It would be like trying to make friends with a serial killer or terrorist. Even if they reformed, it would be hard not to hate them or get traumatic flashbacks in their presence.
Anyhow, just wanted to express that, as I was a bit uneasy with that part of the story. I'm very interested to see what role reversals or fantasies play out ar the arcade.
Author's Response: I thought about Carissa's and Jackie's relationship for a bit and we might see that Jackie hasn't fully forgiven Carissa, even if she says she has to both girls. In this VR world that she runs now, we'll see all of their fantasies with the different sizes available to them, but primarily Jackie's. We've seen one already with Marleigh and a partial one with Carissa. I defiantly want to expand Jackie's relationship with Carissa after the VR experience is done to have more reason to it.
Date: December 24 2018 10:26 AM Title: VRcade
Excellent chapter! Now that they are in the VR world...can't wait to see how the unlimited size options are explored between these three very different characters! Would love to see Jackie as the giantess or, perhaps Carissa wrests power over the VR world from Jackie and reverts to some of her old ways with a tiny Jackie and Marleigh? Unlimited possibilities!
Author's Response: I really hope to add at least a chapter to each of the girls personal fantasies dealing with their sizes. Even if she'd the one controlling everything, Jackie will still play ball with Marleigh's and Carissa's personal fantasies. A giant Carissa with tiny Jackie and Marleigh? All three the same size destroying a micro city? I agree, there are so many ideas that could be tossed in but not enough time. Hell, just those two ideas sound really interesting to write in. I hope to satisfy the desires of both the characters and the readers as well :)
Date: December 24 2018 8:08 AM Title: VRcade
Youd better get creative.
Author's Response: I will certainly try to :)
Date: November 30 2018 2:25 PM Title: Breakfast...with company
I think the story could benefit from an antagonist since everyone else is so nice, but the Alyssa character came up so abruptly that it seemed forced. I know this was a first run, so maybe it could be improved. Perhaps as an alternative one of the existing characters finds a darker side of themselves...perhaps Jackie herself. When the three try the role reversal (a great idea!) Jackie's new position of power awakes something in here where she is in charge for once. Perhaps her new position as giantess gets the better of her. Not that she's evil but she enjoys the power. Perhaps it even allows her to better understand Carissa who was in a similar position as a child when she visited Jackie's school for the first time. I think the Alyssa character can be developed a bit more, and just wanted to provide some alternative ideas for an antagonist. Great work as always!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And yeah, Alyssa's introduction could've been a little more organic and not forced as you said. But I love your idea of one of the three becoming 'darker'. It's definitely an idea we could see in the future. Adding Alyssa however back into the story however, I'll go back to the drawing board on that one. Hope to see you around, hopefully with Alyssa's reintroduction fixed and definitely more organic!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2018 8:23 PM Title: Friends?
Awesome chapter!
Jackie and Carissa's interaction was nice and wholesome. You're doing a great job at organically getting them past what happened in the past between them.
The arcade place seems like a cool thing for them too. It could be a neat way for them to all interact at the same level, along with whatever other crazy stuff that sort of thing could cause.