[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 7:18 PM Title: Chapter Six
This story is so good so far
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! If you're a fan of this story, I've written a whole new branch off of it and made a sexy voice recording. You can hear the first chapter here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ok4xqhXLECA
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 5:36 PM Title: Chapter Six
This story is amazing! One of the best stories I've read in a long time! Ashley really knows how to tease her tinies. I hope this story goes for a while. It would be cool to hear one of the shrunken teachers pov. Also to show the pov from inside the panties. Awesome story.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you so much! If you're a fan of this story, I've written a whole new branch off of it and made a sexy voice recording. A bratty cheerleader claims the principal of her school as her little pet. You can hear the first chapter here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ok4xqhXLECA
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 11:23 AM Title: Chapter Six
What stands out to me the most about stories is the dialogue. I read your lollipop story a while back, and even though I wasn't the biggest fan of mouth play, the way the giantess talked down to the little guy constantly and in a naughty way, really grabbed my attention.
This story is soemthing I'm more of a fan of, so combined with your writing style, this should no time end up as one of my favorites.
My favorite scene so far is when Ben saw Ashely drop Mark in her panties. It felt as if Ashely was teasing Ben about his future home and that he might end up in there someday.
I prefer Ashley call him cutie over bunny. Bunny feels innocent, if that makes sense. I guess Ben is innocent, but cutie sounds like soemthing you would call something helpless and that's how I see Ben in this situation.
I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! If you're a fan of this story, I've written a whole new branch off of it and made a sexy voice recording. A bratty cheerleader claims the principal of her school as her little pet. You can hear the first chapter here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ok4xqhXLECA