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Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2018 8:37 AM Title: Dream State

Really enjoyed this latest chapter and the revelations behind the trigger for size change. How far from being complete is this story? I would have thought that the guy would be trying to get his size back at this point.

Author's Response:

Right now the planned end point of this story is ???.  It's a toss-up between end of this day and after a day of school, depending on how I feel when I get to the former and whether I can keep it going without getting repetitive.  However, he is not going to get his size back, nor even try to, since this is what he wants.

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2018 2:06 AM Title: Big Revelation

Another great chapter. Love the interactions between them now that they both know how they can prompt their size changes. Hope the story stays gentle even as he gets really small. Exploring her body like a landscape would be fun :)



Author's Response:

I'm having a great time walking the line between "gentle and playful" and cruel and playful" and erring on the side of the former.  Keep reading and reviewing to get more of what you want!

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 11:05 PM Title: Dream State

Love the story and characters so far can’t wait to see what happens next. Will we get to see any more interaction with her butt? Maybe when he gets small enough he realizes he’s as small as her thong string?

Author's Response:

There will definitely be butt interactions in the future.  I love writing butt stuff, but like for it to be huge in comparison.  

Reviewer: Bobbylaws Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 8:45 AM Title: Dream State

I really like that Sarah is starting to own the giantess role picturing herself huge rather than just him being tiny. Hopefully she will actually grow that big one day? I think the neighborhood would enjoy it.



Author's Response:

You could say she's starting to grow into her role, in fact ;) I don't report the numbers every chapter but she has been growing, and it's getting faster now.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2018 3:49 AM Title: Sucked Off

I enjoyed that, good to see them getting physical again ;)

I was expecting a bit of detail/description from his point of view, since his head was basically being deep-throated, I'd have thought that'd be a key part of the experience for him.

Hah and now I definetly want to see it lead to accidental (or deliberate!) vore or something ;)



Author's Response:

I thought there was plenty of detail from his POV, though it was mostly tactile and sound.  It's pretty dark inside a mouth, even with her lips opening a little bit.

 

There will definitely be more mouth play, though probably not straight up vore outside of dream sequences.

Reviewer: Bobbylaws Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2018 6:50 AM Title: Dream State

This continues to be a terrific story! I know you are a fan of socks, but is it at all possible to mix that interaction with bare feet at all? Thanks, and I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Would in-sock suffice?  Because that's certainly going to happen.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 2:17 AM Title: Dream State

Finally our protagonist is getting somewhere with the shrinking. Sarah seems like a true giantess now. Now she only needs to grow to like 100 ft and take over that neighbourhood.

Thanks for writing the the many updates! 



Author's Response:

Pretty soon he'll be able to fit completely under her foot, then the good times can roll.  Not so sure about Sarah growing quite that big, but she'll definitely keep going.

 

Thanks for reading them and reviewing when you can!

Reviewer: madeofwin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 9:59 PM Title: Dream State

I'm glad to see more of this.  It feels like her growth is falling to the wayside a litle.  



Author's Response:

Admittedly it is, but out of necessity rather than negligence.  Since it's from his POV and he knows he's shrinking, all of her growth just seems like he's shrinking more.  Plus, beyond a certain point it doesn't make that big of a difference whether someone is 6' or 7', they're still gigantic to your eyes.  However, I'm glad you're reading, and hope you keep doing so.

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 6:29 PM Title: Bad Dreams

Glad to see him wake up so small. It's time to get to some real fun. I do knida wonder if fear from his nightmares will ever play in, like if he gets more worried about getting lost and starts to cling even closer to Sarah.



Author's Response:

The rest of the chapters are going to be a great time, I just hope they don't get too repetitive when he reaches maximum smallness.  The dreams are really just fun scenarios I come up with where the various giantesses get to smash or eat him, they're more of a release valve so that I don't do it in the actual story.  I might start a companion piece that's just dreams once he gets really small so I don't end this one prematurely out of frustration of not having Sarah eat him if that's something people would be interested in.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 5:36 PM Title: Dream State

Just wanted to say that it has been awesome how prolific you have been the past few weeks. I've enjoyed the majority of the chapters that you have released for everything. This story is really good from the little bit that I have read.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Author's Response:

Thanks for being such a frequent reader!  It gets a bit difficult to keep things fresh writing so often, so if you see something you like please let me know so I can do more of it.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2018 5:36 PM Title: Dream State

Just wanted to say that it has been awesome how prolific you have been the past few weeks. I've enjoyed the majority of the chapters that you have released for everything. This story is really good from the little bit that I have read.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Reviewer: kyary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2018 1:23 PM Title: Dream State

Hard to express just how good the newest chapter is. Really love the different characters and the escalating tension. You really have me wondering how the story will end. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

After the upcoming dream chapter it'll just be him and Sarah for a while, but all the others are going to come back if he goes to school again.  Keep reading and reviewing please!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 8:45 PM Title: Going Home

These last few chapters have been great. He's been slowly but surely shrinking throughout, and last chapter got some good thigh action in as a sign of things to come. This chapter was something I knew had to happen eventually to bring some conflict into the sotry, especially once we had already met these two grils at the mall earlier. But we get to forget it about for a little while and enjoy the great stuff that's coming up. Can't wait for them to be home and alone!



Author's Response:

It was really nice to do something instead of have her talk about doing something, and that's kind of a breaking chapter where they actually can do stuff.  For the next while it's going to just be the two of them, but if i decide to keep going with at least one day at school (it'll be pushing 30 chapters at that point) they'll definitely come back into the picture to re-inject some conflict, especially if the story seems to be sagging then.

Reviewer: Chinaislitfam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 7:06 PM Title: Dream State

I hope his voice doesn’t get too high pitched / quiet so Sarah can’t even hear him. That approach has been taken a lot and it annoys (me personally). Keep doing it however you want to though! Really like how Sarah protects him even though she teases him.

Author's Response:

A lot of the appeal and fun of writing this comes from their interactions, so it'd be pretty lame if he couldn't even talk, wouldn't it?  Nah, it'll just be another thing for her to tease him about.

Reviewer: Chinaislitfam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 10:37 PM Title: Dream State

Please make a scene where he gets captured by other girls in school! (If you want to) I want to see what the other girls would do to him if they got ahold of him.

Author's Response:

There's actually going to be a hint of that in the next chapter, but it's going to be quite a while before Sarah takes him to school with her.  When she does though he'll be the center of attention, whether he wants to be or not.

Reviewer: Chinaislitfam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 10:37 PM Title: Dream State

Please make a scene where he gets captured by other girls in school! (If you want to) I want to see what the other girls would do to him if they got ahold of him.

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 5:47 AM Title: Shoe Shopping

It's cute and fun, I like their relationship, but I sort of hope the "shopping" arc comes to an end soon ;)  (it reminds me of the filler "Beach Holiday" or "Hot Springs" or "Cooking" arcs from Anime series!)



Author's Response:

It's mostly a result of trying to figure out what I can do at the less exciting sizes and simultaneously remedy Sarah growing out of her clothes.  It'll be over very soon, don't worry.

Reviewer: Shrinkwolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2018 2:37 AM Title: Shoe Shopping

Another solid couple of chapters. I can't wait to see what she does with those new shoes when he gets really small! Keep it up!

Reviewer: LilBinary Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2018 9:58 AM Title: Dream State

Just found this story. Love it! The teasing interaction between the characters is awesome! I also like how they are eagerly looking forward to it, instead of the cliche "oh no... i've dreamed about this but now that it's happening i hate it".

Cannot wait to see more!



Author's Response:

If you like how they're looking forward to it, wait until he gets small enough for them to have some real fun :) I don't have to tell you to keep reading, but please keep reviewing too!  I love hearing what people like about my stories.

Reviewer: Bobbylaws Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2018 4:05 AM Title: Dream State

I enjoy stories where there is a protector role which Sarah is falling into. It makes the story more dynamic and highlights the vulnerability of the tiny very well. Looking forward to him getting much smaller (and maybe her getting bigger)!



Author's Response:

Sarah wants to make it clear: the only person who gets to tease her boyfriend about stepping on him is her.  He's slowly but surely getting smaller, and she's getting a little bigger, so keep reading and letting me know what you think!

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